"problems" in pop music and the poss. need for a formalist criticism (your suggestions here!)

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on this thread, as on many others, i've called for a pop criticism more informed by an understanding of "how music works as music."

here's the thread where i (and anyone else who wishes to join me) pose examples of "problems" in pop music which Criticism As It Is Now have addressed unsatisfactorily (or only partially), and which some kind of musicology (broadly defined)-informed analysis might better address.

first example:

the new liz phair album.

every review seems to suggest that her sound is different, the "rough edges have been sanded off," etc.

most of guess have a *sense* of what this means--we can hear it, we can describe it impressionistically and a bit vaguely.

but what are the actual formal elements of liz phair's music that have been changed? what sorts of harmonies and chords etc. is she using that she hadn't before? is the harmonic pallette narrowed or broadened? etc.

i think someone could conceiveably explain this without being "show-offy" or terribly longwinded. and it would be terribly more interesting than the umpteenth review making the same nebulous comparison between new and old liz phair and arguing back and forth about whether she's "sold out" or not.

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:34 (twenty-one years ago)

you so crazy.

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:36 (twenty-one years ago)

This type of criticism doesn't seem very commercially viable.

n/a (Nick A.), Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:37 (twenty-one years ago)

Chords/harmonies/notes are out, sonics are in.

Jordan (Jordan), Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:41 (twenty-one years ago)

i think ama is maybe looking for a music criticism more akin to the film and book crit that shows up in places like harper's (just throwing a name out), which is all well and good, but these magazines couldn't give a good goddamn about popular music by and large.

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:42 (twenty-one years ago)

music crit is more of a semi-complicated (in the when i show my mom a piece she "doesn't get it" because i have to condense my refs and ideas so much) shorthand these days mostly owing to reasons of space and commerce.

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:44 (twenty-one years ago)

An amusing subset of criticism that does get more "technical": the record reviews near the back of drum/guitar/bass/keyboard/computer gear magazines.

Jordan (Jordan), Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:45 (twenty-one years ago)

jordan: you mean production nuances? compression? EQ? the acoustics of recording studios? well, talk about that too. that'd be great!

jess: re. harper's, etc.: not quite. there are unfortunate deficits in film criticism as well. but it's unfortunate that so many magazines (and schools) have no space for pop music! (although sasha's new yorker column is a def. advance on that front, if it lasts.)

when is started this thread i was thinking less about the real-world problems with the viability of such a criticism (owing to commerce, etc.) than hoping for examples of how it could be useful. but we can talk about both.

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:46 (twenty-one years ago)

And come to think of it, that might be what you're looking for, publications catering to musicians rather than a mass audience.

(x-post)

Jordan (Jordan), Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:46 (twenty-one years ago)

several xposts

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:46 (twenty-one years ago)

well it would be "useful" in the sense that it would erase some of the ambiguity that accrues around pretty much useless phrases like "sell out", yr right.

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:48 (twenty-one years ago)

jordan: a "poetics of popular music" would be more ambitious, less technical, more historial-social in its appreciation, than the stuff in music magazines. it wouldn't PRESUME the musical norms of a genre but inform the audience of same and perhaps the particular artist's contribution to/deviation from same. but it probably has as much in common w/such magazines as with rock criticism as practiced in the alteraweeklies.


MORE EXAMPLES PLS!!

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:48 (twenty-one years ago)

we're dangerously close to opening the "superwords" pandoras box here.

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 20:49 (twenty-one years ago)

"less technical" is the wrong phrase

"less exclusively technical" is what i meant to write

(i felt rushed by the onslaught of xposts)

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:00 (twenty-one years ago)

One of the things I'm interested in doing is not just saying, "Elements of I Get Wet sound like Kimono My House," but showing how it is so. Showing that a particular lick/rhythm/etc. from a song on I Get Wet is derived from one on Kimono My House.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:03 (twenty-one years ago)

Gah. Just typed a long post and the computer ate it. Example, though - I'd like to see a more formalist approach with regard to singing. It often seems to be the area in which even good reviews can lapse into cliche, and a lot of the time it gets bizarrely overlooked as well (in comparison to other instruments, arrangements, samples) as a key aspect of a song (especially if the singer is not the songwriter). 90% of rock critics probably don't understand any vocal technicalities at all... I've often found posts by Dan and Jody Beth useful in the archives on this subject, actually, and there was a very interesting interview with Diamanda Galas I read once somewhere where she pinpointed a lot of specific vocal techniques which she felt weren't noticed too much.

The Lex (The Lex), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:05 (twenty-one years ago)

thanks for the good examples, tim and alex (gah sorry if that sounds condescending, i don't mean it to be).

one possible thing that could happen as a result of a practiced formal criticism is bringing the art of criticism and the art of making music a bit closer together. it could even potentially help diminish the skepticism that many musicians feel toward criticism (though a lot of that skepticism is probably inevitable, not for the best reasons). i think a good formal criticism would be very informed by an understanding of the sort of choices artists in a given genre make (sometimes half-unconsciously?!) when creating music.

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:08 (twenty-one years ago)

It's funny, I feel like whenever I try to write music criticism lately, I spend too much time talking about what individual instruments are doing, and not enough coming up with those impressionistic phrases that are often able to capture something as ineffable as music better than literal descriptions. Ideally, I'd like to see a mixture of both, though.

jaymc (jaymc), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:09 (twenty-one years ago)

I think the biggest barrier to formal criticism is that a pretty good understanding of music theory etc is required. Most rock critics don't have this because most people generally don't have this... classical training seems to be essential for this.

The Lex (The Lex), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:11 (twenty-one years ago)

One of the problems with a more formalist criticism -- at least if my own attempts are any indication -- is that it can seem so DRY. The impressionistic stuff is at least fairly entertaining and cleverly written sometimes. I don't want to lose any of the poetry in good criticism by focusing so much on musical technique.

jaymc (jaymc), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:12 (twenty-one years ago)

i think good rhetoric and a precise well-developed argument ARE good writing, exciting writing, entertaining writing. i think writing about "technique" (though this is not really what i mean by a poetics of pop music) needn't be "dry" at all. i can't make this point strongly enough.

i think musical training is probably a prerequisite, but it would have to be a *modified* or *nuanced* classical training, since the same tools are not used for pop music (or even different genres of pop music) as for classical music.

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:15 (twenty-one years ago)

the presumed dichotomy between "formal analysis" and "exciting criticism" is one i would like to see upset!

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:16 (twenty-one years ago)

Yeah, me too! I'm just saying, it's a challenge!

jaymc (jaymc), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:17 (twenty-one years ago)

I think the examples I cited (Dan and JBR's posts, that Diamanda Galas interview where she starts ranting passionately about singers she enjoys in really technical terms) upset that dichotomy!

The Lex (The Lex), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:17 (twenty-one years ago)

perhaps what ama is looking for is the crit version of steely dan

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:19 (twenty-one years ago)

that makes no sense but i like it :)

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:21 (twenty-one years ago)

heh i was thinking "technical prowess but an eye for language"

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:22 (twenty-one years ago)

go back to your ivory tower, hippie communist.

frankE (frankE), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:25 (twenty-one years ago)

The problem is with communicating this stuff to people who don't know music theory in a way that would make the reader even care for it.

I mean - so what if diamanda or any pop singer used this or that technique, you know.

Julio Desouza (jdesouza), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:26 (twenty-one years ago)

gd thing abt ilm is that it picks on certain words/cliches and certain attitudes expressed by the reviewer but its going from that to the kinds of things that are being proposed in this thread.

Julio Desouza (jdesouza), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:29 (twenty-one years ago)

I think one of the traps of placing the emphasis on classical training is that it encourages the writer to place to much emphasis on the structures of creation (ie. hypothetically the most rigorous and comprehensive review would essentially allow the reader to recreate the piece of music down to the last note, nuance and peculiarity) as opposed to the structures of reception. I'm more interested in determining how it is that listeners pick up on, categorise and pass judgment on aspects of music like vocal ability, "roughness", groove etc. And I don't mean sociological studies of listeners; rather, attempting to create critical models which map onto the the music's strategy of effectiveness in engaging the listener. How does a given piece of music "cast a spell" over us? Too much non-formal music resorts to quasi-mythic terminology at that point, but the spell in question is really a piece of elaborate charlatanism, a confluence of sonic tactics which, in the mind or the body of the listener, appears to be something more than a series of discrete sounds. What is it that is allowing to a piece of music to do this to us (both at a "textual" and contextual level)?

One way to do this is to look at the pre-existing metaphors and rationales that pop up in music reviews, but apart from the mythic aspect of some of the problems with these are that they're usually hobbled together cliches with no real explanatory power, or they're based on some concept external to music (eg. critics who treat songwriting like literature), or they're unknowingly discriminatory, veiling a "best practice" standard of which all other music is merely an inferior derivation.

Of course I think most critical concepts are going to suffer from this veiled best practice thing (whether the idol is real or imagined) because we use critical concepts to say something about the qualitative value of the music we're looking at. But I think it's important to allow for an endless multiplicity of critical models to explain this strategy of effectiveness, to allow the music we're looking at to determine the nature of the critical concept we use along an ascending model of analysis rather than a descending model of analysis. Indeed there can be no one model to explain this interaction between the music and the listener, because inherent to the success of a "strategy" is its novel combination of tactics, its element of surprise.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:41 (twenty-one years ago)

I love me the Tim.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:45 (twenty-one years ago)

You can't separate the two things. The tightness of the groove in James Brown or whatever is a concrete phenomenon that can be measured and analyzed. The "spell" is not a metaphysical thing; it's made up of real components.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:51 (twenty-one years ago)

A thread with a similar discussion is here :
C Eddy (or peeps like him) vs. J Pareles (or peeps like him)

... and of course many of you are familiar with it since you posted there as well.

Barry Bruner (Barry Bruner), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:53 (twenty-one years ago)

Yes exactly! But I don't think that simply explaining how the music was created necessarily covers the full extent of explaining how it operates on the listener (for one thing it misses out on, or misconstrues, the role of context). (x-post)

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 21:54 (twenty-one years ago)

i have to leave work in a moment, but v. briefly: i agree entirely tim. my model for this is the "poetics of cinema" explored in david bordwell's books, esp. his books on ozu and dreyer, in which the question is not so much "how did this music get made?" but "how does this music function as a work of art?" i.e. how do its effects function. which involves some sophisticated notions of how film is perceived/understood. so a "poetics of pop music" would involve reception as well, at a very fundamental level.

more later.

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:00 (twenty-one years ago)

"The tightness of the groove in James Brown or whatever is a concrete phenomenon that can be measured and analyzed. The "spell" is not a metaphysical thing; it's made up of real components."

The next question I want to ask though is "for what reasons or under what conditions would the listener *want* a tight groove". I don't think you can rest on the technical explanation of the tightness of the groove as an explanation of the music's quality because that assumes that tightness (in grooves) is universally desirable.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:01 (twenty-one years ago)

right. this reminds me a quote from barthes. he was answering critics who argued that a "formalist" analysis was ahistorical. he responded that a naive formalism did indeed pull us out of history (w/unfortunate results) but a sophisticated formalism brought us closer to history than any other method. that is, understanding the concrete circumstances of the making of those james brown records would include not such technical issues but the proximate contexts in which the musical choices were made: the demands of the marketplace, demands of the record label, etc., which are in turn influenced by wider social phenomena. the trick is to follow this path outward very very carefully and methodically and sensibly, and not (as so much, if not most, rock criticism tends to do) leap from impressionistic description of music to broad arguments about society in a single bound.

ok i really gotta leave now....

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:09 (twenty-one years ago)

not JUST technical issues

i should add that between the music's creation and the "demands of the marketplace" there are even more proximate factors like the cost of a session, new dance crazes, james brown's bass player being fired on thursday, etc.

amateur!!st, Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:11 (twenty-one years ago)

but thats still treating the music as an object not an experience

gaz (gaz), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:12 (twenty-one years ago)

As a component of Brown's music's *effect* on the listener, I would consider the tight groove to be a "tactic" rather than a "strategy" (although if we were to zero in on the groove itself we might see how it is comprised of a number of different "tactics"). Tactics in music as in battles are things which have a certain replicability across a number of situations; hence to explain their use one merely has to explain their technical operation. But a strategy is dependent on too many real-life variables. In battle it's the size of your enemy's force, their weapons, the lay of the land, the weather etc. In music it's the sensibility and predilections of the listener, the context in which the music is heard, the other music that person has heard, either in their life or just that day. In that sense a strategy cannot exist without a (real or hypothetical) listener, listening situation, listening history. Indeed, the third term that goes along with "tactic" and "strategy" is the "terrain" of the listener's context, upon which the strategy is always deployed. The overall "battle" - ie. what we are attempting to explain - is the listener's experience of the music, as opposed to the music itself, because a strategy without a situation to which it applies is kinda meaningless. (ha ha big xpost with amateurist and gaz!)

Rachel Stevens' "Some Girls" can be explained technically by breaking down its discrete sonic and musical components, but that doesn't explain the wealth of associations, the interlinks between sonics and contexts (most obviously the schaffel-pop groove, whose resonance will be utterly different depending on whether the listener can "place" it or not).

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:18 (twenty-one years ago)

It should go without saying that the strategy is neither identical to the creator's intentions, nor somehow "inherent" to the music as an object.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:19 (twenty-one years ago)

There's nothing necessarily wrong with treating music like an object. It IS an object.

Regarding the tightness of the groove: rhythmic regularity is significant in making people want to dance. That's how drum machines and Kraftwerk can be "funky." If you could show, graphically, how the members of James Brown's band's articulations are all constantly right on the beats (or on the upbeats or wherever they're supposed to go), and that the tempo stays very constant, that would be significant.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:21 (twenty-one years ago)

Yeah I accept that, and acknowledge that it's an enormous component in terms of how the music works. But does that explain why certain forms of tightness and funkiness go in and out of fashion? Or why some people like dancing to it and others don't? Or how people actually, physically dance to it? Again I don't see how that approach goes beyond a sort of ahistorical impersonal explanation that has to presume some ideal audience reaction for which there is no real explanation.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:32 (twenty-one years ago)

doesn't any discussion of why james brown's music "works" have to include a counter-example that "doesn't" work? and then we're already in a quagmire of "right" and "wrong".

xpost with tim

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:39 (twenty-one years ago)

i just plain flat out do not care about fifths or upbeats or thirds to fifths or minors or harmonic palettes. why should i give a shit about the structure to bizarre love triangle? or the roots of the feelies' polyrhythms? or want pick apart a song or artist until it's/they're just a piece of meat graded on its "quality".

personally, i want to feel it, not think it.

frankE (frankE), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:40 (twenty-one years ago)

I want to think about how you feel it.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:42 (twenty-one years ago)

"feeling" and "thinking" shouldn't be set against each other like dogs

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:43 (twenty-one years ago)

"feeling" without "thinking" about those feelings is the province of children and the mentally handicapped.

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:43 (twenty-one years ago)

(sorry, that sounds harsher than i intended.)

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:44 (twenty-one years ago)

i mean, it's a gift and a curse. i wish i could think "i like candy" without thinking 18 other things about that thought, but you can't go home again.

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:47 (twenty-one years ago)

it = adulthood

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:47 (twenty-one years ago)

I want to think about how you feel it.
Then write a thesis about it.

"feeling" and "thinking" shouldn't be set against each other like dogs
cocks then? with razor blade claws.

"feeling" without "thinking" about those feelings is the province of children and the mentally handicapped.
uh...okay.

xposts

frankE (frankE), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:49 (twenty-one years ago)

This is like some complex computer game where you've gotten to the final level and you're battling some big evil firebreathing monster, and then suddenly a henchman from level one appears and shoots a flower seed at you.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:51 (twenty-one years ago)

i wish i could think "i like candy" without thinking 18 other things about that thought, but you can't go home again.

Then you should understand why I don't want to think about "I Want Candy".

frankE (frankE), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:52 (twenty-one years ago)

tim you need the wizard's key. (i.e. the delete button.)

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:53 (twenty-one years ago)

This is like some complex computer game where you've gotten to the final level and you're battling some big evil firebreathing monster, and then suddenly a henchman from level one appears and shoots a flower seed at you.

heh heh. that's me.

frankE (frankE), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:53 (twenty-one years ago)

i will be using the wizard's key shortly, i fear.

jess (dubplatestyle), Thursday, 9 September 2004 22:54 (twenty-one years ago)

"But does that explain why certain forms of tightness and funkiness go in and out of fashion?"

No, but it didn't claim to.

"Or why some people like dancing to it and others don't? Or how people actually, physically dance to it? Again I don't see how that approach goes beyond a sort of ahistorical impersonal explanation that has to presume some ideal audience reaction for which there is no real explanation."

Sometimes it just suffices to say, "A lot of people like to dance to James Brown. Their enormously tight rhythmic regularity is part of why that is so."

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:00 (twenty-one years ago)

Not to say that your questions are not also relevant.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:02 (twenty-one years ago)

Which just shows that you and I are (interested in) talking/thinking about different things. But a "poetics of pop music" surely has to take this sort of stuff into account, insofar as it is a poetics of the popular. (oops x-post)

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:10 (twenty-one years ago)

after frankE i don't feel bad about butting in after only skimming the thread (a lot of which is a repeat from similar previous arguments anyway it seems)(tho significant parts aren't) and asking questions that may have been previously addressed - it seems that, on these boards, whenever we've seen anyone exercise anything thing like formalist criticism (dan perry on the vocal limits of justin timberlake, as mentioned above), they've been accused of point-missing. in these 4 years of ILM, has anyone come close to amateurist's proposed formalist/quasi-sociological/non-naive/zap!-pow!-entertaining/all-bases covered inclusive model of crit? is there a successful, currently-operating version of this crit happening anywhere in any other field (one that would necessarily have to attract a significant readership)? it just wonder if its a pipedream (though one thats worth articulating, no doubt). also, perhaps more troubling, it feels like an imaginative leap-to-far for me to envision even the most enfeebled, entertainment weekly-ized version of formalist crit having any grasp on my attention span, for better or worse. i guess i'm like frankE in that respect.

m. (mitchlnw), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:14 (twenty-one years ago)

I think the issue with Dan-on-Timberlake is that the problems he seems to find in Timberlake's vocals are ones which classical training explains is "wrong" but which doesn't necessarily sound wrong to an audience which isn't classically trained, and indeed might sound very "right". This brings us back to Jess's point just a little bit above - technical assessments of right and wrong inevitably entail a universalist moral code which, far from actually being universal, only makes sense from within the discourse used.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:26 (twenty-one years ago)

i just don't know how much rock crit i would want to read that reads like jazz and classical crit. although i do enjoy some jazz and classical crit, and i guess that's where i go when i want to read the kind of stuff that amateurist is talking about. history/theory/sound/drama-behind-the-scenes/context/etc. I can think of some people who post on ilm who do go above and beyond the standard rock-crit drawl and spit thang though. And I enjoy them a great deal.

scott seward (scott seward), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:30 (twenty-one years ago)

We're in luck, sorta. In his Interpreting Popular Music, David Brackett performs a formalist analysis of James Brown's "Superbad" in order to "examine the discursive space in which the concepts of 'blackness' and 'African-American music' have been produced." I've not actually read it, but what I make of it, he makes his case in what seems like lively academic prose.

Whenever this subject comes up, I always feel like I'm saying the same thing: while I don't have the chops to perform useful analyses of the techne of music, I'm all for other people doing it, anything to add to the galaxy of possible understandings of rock music cannot be anything but a good thing, let a hundred flowers blom, etc.

Michael Daddino (epicharmus), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:32 (twenty-one years ago)

2X-post: Which is not to say that they're always irrelevant! Example: A band wants to sound like a sixties garage band. They fail. I explain how they fail musicologically.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:33 (twenty-one years ago)

i mean, how ridiculous would it be to write a formal, "musicologist" critique of the ramones?

frankE (frankE), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:38 (twenty-one years ago)

Depends on how (and why) it's done. Obviously, the Ramones' appeal has to do with the musical components of their songs. Why is it necessarily boring to talk about them?

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:42 (twenty-one years ago)

You know what I do like a lot: reading what musicians have to say about music and other musicians. I learn a lot that way. Not ALL musicians obviously. But even if it is just a simple Q & A, the results can be entertaining. And I even enjoy highly technical shop talk between musicians. I find it fascinating. My friend Donald is the editor of one of the world's leading BANJO magazines and the interviews about styles/history/etc with leading BANJO players give me hours of incomprehensible pleasure. So, in the end, more musicians who can write well should write crit.

scott seward (scott seward), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:42 (twenty-one years ago)

Also, frank, "musicology" IS a real word...

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:44 (twenty-one years ago)

i know it's a real word, tim. i use the quotes to mock.

frankE (frankE), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:45 (twenty-one years ago)

Re: Ramones. Not very ridiculous at all: I want an EXPLANATION...I want to create a satisfactory explanation why doing a seemingly simple thing like returning to the tonic always seems so refreshing, inevitable, right on a good punk single, and doing it in standard rockcrit formulation seems, ugh, so tautological.

Michael Daddino (epicharmus), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:46 (twenty-one years ago)

i'm curious, how many of you on the other side of this polemic musicians? maybe it's just that i am not formally (or informally) trained in music. i listen to music strictly for enjoyment. what is being discussed here seems to me to appeal to a musicians, which make up a much smaller subset of listeners, most of whom have their own social/cultural/personal/identification/whatever reasons to listen. i'll give you that it *can* be interesting, but when i'm walking down the street listening to, say, the commodores' "this is your life" and having my neck hair stand up on end, to me, it matters not why.

frankE (frankE), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:53 (twenty-one years ago)

i listen to music strictly for enjoyment.

But I think about music strictly for enjoyment, too!

Michael Daddino (epicharmus), Thursday, 9 September 2004 23:58 (twenty-one years ago)

frankE, you do know that a lot of people on ILM write about music, right? Some of them for love and some for money and some for both? Cuz they are obsessed and smart and like to think about things?

scott seward (scott seward), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:01 (twenty-one years ago)

so what kind of journalism points you at the music you like to listen to frankE...and how does it do it?

gaz (gaz), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:01 (twenty-one years ago)

and i'm not trying to be a smart-ass or anything. but talking and theorizing and debating and discussing and arguing about art can be fun, you know?

scott seward (scott seward), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:02 (twenty-one years ago)

dnftt

jess (dubplatestyle), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:03 (twenty-one years ago)

The Ramones argument reminded me that I had written a partly musicologically-oriented piece on early LA punk for some zine about four years ago. Here's a link to it if anyone's interested.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:05 (twenty-one years ago)

I've always suspected that the main reason you don't read more "formalist" criticism re: pop music is that most music journalists aren't musicians (whereas book reviews are almost always written by "writers", and in films, even if you nothing about cinematogrophy, all movies have a screenplay. This might also be the reason lyrics are given a lot more scrutiny in music criticism than the musical devices/forms). You can't analyze things you're totally unfamiliar with. On one hand, I do think it's a cop out to explain this away with more complex philosophical reasons, but on the other, there is validity in talking about music in a way that most people reading the review will understand.

However, IMO the structures and phenomenon within music itself are perfectly up for discussion and analysis within a normal album or song review. Why not? At the very least, it's just another plane of discussion, and why should anyone restrict themselves about what they're willing to consider about music?

Dominique (dleone), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:07 (twenty-one years ago)

"People who write about music are just bitter that they themselves can't play it."

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 00:11 (twenty-one years ago)

"whereas book reviews are almost always written by "writers""

um, no they aren't

book reviews are almost always written by people who wish they were writers, just as most music reviews are written by people who wish they were musicians.

those who can, do. those who can't work as critics.

(except for bad footballers- they just play in goals)

Darraghmac, Friday, 10 September 2004 00:14 (twenty-one years ago)

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

gaz (gaz), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:14 (twenty-one years ago)

you (ceddy) said, bitter, not me. or you linked it anyway.

Besides, if music writers are bitter, there are a lot better reasons than not being musicians.

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I already regret posting to this thread. I would like to state for the record, that I don't believe the "those who can't, write" line.

Dominique (dleone), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:15 (twenty-one years ago)

I SAID DNFTT'S DAMMIT

jess (dubplatestyle), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:16 (twenty-one years ago)

so what kind of journalism points you at the music you like to listen to frankE

Good question. These days, next to none. Honestly. I've kind of given up on music journalism except to see what has been released. Why? Hrmm. I think I've come to view so much of it as vacuous filler between advertisements or a tool by whomever to get free shit in the mail or maybe some public relations bait to get a bigger interview.

Just about everything I've come to love lately has come from reading ILM. My recent obsession with "Ignition (remix)", which I had never heard until two weeks ago, for instance came about after reading a thread on the new R. Kelly album. Likewise, Chuck made Big & Rich sound really fun in a couple posts on the rolling 2004 country thread. I was also, a few months back, able to read someone say the last Guided By Voices (a band I'd long since given up on) was their best., so I gave it a shot. Now, back before ILM or the internet, I *had* to rely on crit out of economic necessity. Now, fugg, anything can be pulled down at any time and immediately deleted or saved as *my* tastes discern. It's great.

No musicological (is that a word, tim?) argument ever made me go out and buy an album. I don't understand it. If that's why I'm against the whole concept, I apologize. It strikes me as boring.

I will say this, though. The other day, there was some mention of thirds to fifths or some such on the Fiery Furnaces Blueberry Boat and how it's their only trick. I did think to myself, oh, maybe that's why I can't listen to that album very often. So maybe you guys have a point. Maybe...

frankE (frankE), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:19 (twenty-one years ago)

I've always suspected that the main reason you don't read more "formalist" criticism re: pop music is that most music journalists aren't musicians

But there are plenty of critic-musicians and musician-critics, and they rarely venture into the musicological path. (Kogan's something of an exception.)

Michael Daddino (epicharmus), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:20 (twenty-one years ago)

ilm = music writing, dude

jess (dubplatestyle), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:21 (twenty-one years ago)

k. you win.

frankE (frankE), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:22 (twenty-one years ago)

Right, Michael, you're looking at one. To be honest, I might write more about the mechanics of music if I could figure out how to do it without getting tons of mail about how I'm a "muso" who should stick to Rush albums.

Dominique (dleone), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:22 (twenty-one years ago)

To me arfarf's terrific example posted upthread (or was it in the other thread?) wasn't great bcuz of the technical explanations but because the technical explanations helped to explain WHY ppl love James Brown, WHY ppl love jazz, and WHY ppl react to them differently. It helped hammer home why I love both - in straightforward terms.

It had nothing to do with his impressive technical knowledge and everything to do with what he did with it. The technical knowledge is not neccessary; it can help in certain situations. Which I think is essentially what Tim is saying - you have to be pragmatic and adapt yr writing to the context - time place experience whatever - of when yr reviewing it.

(correct me if I'm wrong)

djdee2005, Friday, 10 September 2004 00:25 (twenty-one years ago)

Come to think of it, an analogy I can come up with right now is my bikes. My wife and I own five. I love riding my bike. A lot of people I know are obsessed with weight and top-tube length and fork angles and gear ratios. Fuck. It just doesn't matter to me. I get on my bike and I ride it. Each bike serves a different purpose (commuting, touring, crusing, winter riding), each bike has its merits. If someone asks me a question that comes anywhere close to the physics or math of riding my bike (which is way more often than you'd imagine), I'm just like, uh, I put my feet on these and lift one leg while pushing down with the other. Good enough for me.

frankE (frankE), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:47 (twenty-one years ago)

Is the idea that ppl with technical/theoretical knowedlege could acquire insights about music through this knowedlege that they could then transmit to their readers *without* actually using any technical jargon a pipe dream that only someone who doesn't posess said knowedlege could think possible?

Daniel_Rf (Daniel_Rf), Friday, 10 September 2004 00:51 (twenty-one years ago)

lot of very interesting stuff going on here..

But I don't think that simply explaining how the music was created necessarily covers the full extent of explaining how it operates on the listener

this raised some interesting thoughts in my head

I write music with my laptop, and I find that the best stuff (the stuff that other people are the most excited about when I play it to them, and the stuff that I'm happiest with when it's done) tends to come when I get completely lost in what I'm doing.. when the sound becomes a tactile experience that holds my attention all the way through, without any bits jutting up at me and saying 'I'm wrong' then I know that I'm probably done with a track.

This best stuff comes when I abandon any pretences about what the listener might want to hear and write what I'd want to hear - it's like it turns out that what I want to hear is what everyone else wants to hear, but I mean that not in an arrogant way, I mean like.. umm.. say a track's divided into a,b,c sections, if you engage fully with a) then a satisfying transition from a) to b) in my mind is also a satisfying transition in your mind, if you maintain full engagement. A transition/development/continuation of sound that is musically or logically consistent within the local logical system (but it's not logical, see; it's more like experiential logic, this feeling followed by this feeling because that's what just makes sense) is going to be enjoyable for anyone to listen to, but only if they are fully engaged.

(Embedded in there is part of the reason why I write solo and tend to have a lot of difficulty on collaborative things - electronica works as far as I'm concerned when it's the sound of being alone - that's it's primary strength, ten or thirty or fifty hours of distilled aloneness focussed into eight minutes of music.)


Wow. Why was I talking about that? Ummm..

right. At least with electronica, the techniques of creation and the effect on the listener are one and the same. Composing for me consists of having some vague idea of something, setting it up, and then closing my eyes (sometimes after getting up from the chair and going to sit on the floor between the speakers) and listening and seeing how it feels. So if I've got a rhythmic element that's strongly swinging it's in there because that's what I as a listener would want to hear if I was just listening and not composing.

Listening to electronica for me is an experience which is better sometimes than others. It tends to be better when I'm focussing on it and actively listening to it, rather than just letting it passively float around me. To fully engage with a piece of electronica is to enter into a mindstate similar to if not identical to the mindstate the composer was in when they were playing.

So in cases like this (does this apply to electronica or just electronica that Damian likes? I like trippy electronica, hypnotic stuff that makes your eyes glaze over in a good way) talking about how the music is created, if you limit your terms of creation to a relatively abstract level ('this bit comes in here, this bit stops here'), just is talking about how the music is perceived.

damian_nz (damian_nz), Friday, 10 September 2004 01:10 (twenty-one years ago)

Come to think of it, an analogy I can come up with right now is my bikes.

robert pirsig to thread.

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Lukas (lukas), Friday, 10 September 2004 01:11 (twenty-one years ago)

That's cool about the bike frank but I'm sure there are other things you are curious about, where you want to know and think about the details.

Mark (MarkR), Friday, 10 September 2004 01:29 (twenty-one years ago)

seems like an interesting discussion, a couple of examples would be really helpful. even hypothetical ones.
are we talking about something like this?

Unsatisfatory Crit As It Is Now: This song rocks because the singer is a junky, and the guitars have lots of reverb.

Longwinded Showoffy Crit: This song rocks because of the G#min9 guitar arpeggio played over the VI-ii-VII-ii-Tonic progression.

New More Informed Crit: This song rocks because the chords behind the guitar line make it sound like the tonal center is shifting which is spacy and cool.

looking back, the original question was good in that it provided an example to work with. otherwise it' all very abstract.....

m0stly clean (m0stly clean), Friday, 10 September 2004 01:58 (twenty-one years ago)

Is the idea that ppl with technical/theoretical knowedlege could acquire insights about music through this knowedlege that they could then transmit to their readers *without* actually using any technical jargon a pipe dream that only someone who doesn't posess said knowedlege could think possible?

It's no dream sir!

djdee2005, Friday, 10 September 2004 02:11 (twenty-one years ago)

frankE, you said its never made you go out and buy an album, but i think what were wanting here is a criticism that is not written as a recommendation tool but as a study of the piece for those that are already familiar with it. this is something that interests me greatly, because as of yet, ive not yet seen a holistic criticism of a type of pop music. and i think through this discussion we can find out how that might be done. i think an important distinction should be made between criticism used as a "buyers guide" and criticism used as an analytical tool.

ive got quite a lot of thoughts involved in this discussion and ill try to get them formed and up here soon.

tom cleveland (tom cleveland), Friday, 10 September 2004 02:12 (twenty-one years ago)

I personally think it's unfair to judge something without even knowing about it. You can judge an album on a number of things and one of them is technicality. If an album is lacking in hooks, feeling, whatever...there is the technical aspects to look at and I think somebody giving an album a bad review because it lacks in hooks, good lyrics, etc. and doesn't play or study music is unfair because they can't even comprehend what is happenning on the technical side.
This, to me, should always be one of the top things to look at when reviewing an album for anybody. You may not be feeling it, but that's mostly an opinion. The fact that they/him/she are good musicians is a fact.

seahorse genius (seahorse genius), Friday, 10 September 2004 02:21 (twenty-one years ago)

the sort of criticism i envision isn't really about judgements at all, it's about understanding (though some sort of evaluation enters into everything in the end)-- in fact as noted on other threads i think there's a value in staving off judgement and including as little evaluative language as possible under whatever conditions you are under.

sorry i haven't been on this thread the last few hours, but tomorrow i will write more.

amateur!!!st (amateurist), Friday, 10 September 2004 02:26 (twenty-one years ago)

From the Andrew W.K. thread:

i used to read popular music (sometimes) when i had university-library access. although i found it to be a bit more sociological-esque criticism than formal criticism. unless i'm thinking of a different journal

Popular Music does have non-"sociological" pices, I remember an interesting analysis of Pulp's "This is Hardcore". At least I think it was in PM.

Also, amateurist, what do you think of writers like Philip Tagg and Richard Middleton?

tokyo rosemary (rosemary), Friday, 10 September 2004 02:53 (twenty-one years ago)

seahorse genius - The fact that they/him/she are good musicians is a fact

It is? Explain how.

And how does this relate to pop, where most of what you actually hear is production?

damian_nz (damian_nz), Friday, 10 September 2004 02:59 (twenty-one years ago)

i would suggest that seahorse's post is a tangent we shouldn't follow too long...

amateur!!!st (amateurist), Friday, 10 September 2004 03:01 (twenty-one years ago)

(rosemary: i hadn't read those authors before, i'll see what i can find tonight and tomorrow. thanks for the tips!)

amateur!!!st (amateurist), Friday, 10 September 2004 03:02 (twenty-one years ago)

amateurist : Philip Tagg

tokyo rosemary (rosemary), Friday, 10 September 2004 03:06 (twenty-one years ago)

i'm like, so what i'm drunk...

frankE (frankE), Friday, 10 September 2004 03:33 (twenty-one years ago)

regarding seahorse, if a musician plays in a way that you do not "feel it" they are in fact not a good musician. being a good musician includes ability to play notes a certain speed, to use dynamics, etc., but the end goal is always to be effective. a musician that doesnt affect the listener emotionally (or perhaps even intellectually) they are not a good musician. the listeners technical knowledge, in this sense, is irrelevant. though what we're trying to get at is getting into why it is or isnt effective, in which case a technical knowledge would be helpful, but iwould still say, not completely even completely necessary. am i right in understanding the direction we're trying to move?

i still have to form what i imagine will be a long post involving piet mondrian, captain beefheart, "swing," indeterminacy, elvin jones, and boogie woogie. we'll see if that ever comes out in a somewhat logical fashion.

tom cleveland (tom cleveland), Friday, 10 September 2004 03:35 (twenty-one years ago)

haha atonal vs dissonance

Paul (scifisoul), Friday, 10 September 2004 03:47 (twenty-one years ago)

frankE, have you ever read Laing's One Chord Wonders - particularly the analysis of punk vocal and lyrical styles and production quality is interesting. amateurist, what you are suggesting seems to be quite close to what most academic (not journalistic) criticism of popular music attempts. Although what you are looking for seems to be a bit more openly subjective in orientation - most academics don't openly say "This track rocks me because of (whatever rhythmic and timbral qualities"; they'd more likely say "The rhythmic and timbral qualities of this piece are homologous to the transgressive constructions of identity offered by non-traditional subcultural affiliation";) I think it's kind of what I attempted when I wrote about "Sk8er Boi". But of course, dissertations and conference lectures are a different medium than journalistic reviews.

sundar subramanian (sundar), Friday, 10 September 2004 04:12 (twenty-one years ago)

sundar:
the sort of criticism i envision isn't really about judgements at all, it's about understanding (though some sort of evaluation enters into everything in the end)-- in fact as noted on other threads i think there's a value in staving off judgement and including as little evaluative language as possible under whatever conditions you are under.

amateur!!!st (amateurist), Friday, 10 September 2004 04:17 (twenty-one years ago)

Well, then is it reasonable to say that you're looking for a more academic-style approach to popular music discussion within a more popular journalistic medium?

sundar subramanian (sundar), Friday, 10 September 2004 04:19 (twenty-one years ago)

well the "little evaluative language as possible" is it's own deathtrap, cf. academic language's tight-assed fear of leaving any chink in its armor.

g--ff (gcannon), Friday, 10 September 2004 04:20 (twenty-one years ago)

while i think this question is mostly about wanting a criticism that takes apart whichever segment(s) of the production/distribution/consumption loop you find the most interesting, or opaque, or both, i must say i'd LOVE to see more crit of the even PRE -formalist biographical style, cos the questions i always have are about the RETURN loop from consumption (crowd) back to production (maker), ie "what did it do for them to have done it that way?"

g--ff (gcannon), Friday, 10 September 2004 04:26 (twenty-one years ago)

them = maker/s i mean. sorry, guess i'm a reactionary.

g--ff (gcannon), Friday, 10 September 2004 04:27 (twenty-one years ago)

frankE is the new Oops.

jaymc (jaymc), Friday, 10 September 2004 04:29 (twenty-one years ago)

"regarding seahorse, if a musician plays in a way that you do not "feel it" they are in fact not a good musician. being a good musician includes ability to play notes a certain speed, to use dynamics, etc., but the end goal is always to be effective."

I agree that the end goal is to be effective, yes. But what affects me may not affect you. Isn't it all a matter of personal taste and what the listener has went through and heard before to make it effective? For instance, if you have heard an album in the past that has the same theme/way of approaching things/just overall feeling of the album that you are listening to now, won't that affect your judgement on whether or not this one is effective? If you can relate to the lyrics won't that affect your view on if the album is effective or not?

And this, to me is where we need to look to the technical side of things. After all, to alot of people Avril Lavigne is effective. To me, she isn't, AND nobody in that band is challenging themselves as musicians. I don't think anybody can argue with that. So I think of that as a fact and the rest (if it is effective or not) taken with a grain of salt.

seahorse genius (seahorse genius), Friday, 10 September 2004 05:27 (twenty-one years ago)

Seahorse the first part of your argument there is right (and see my posts upthread as to what a critical understanding of musical reception would require) but then you suddenly jump to "AND nobody in that band is challenging themselves as musicians." Firstly, how do you know that? And secondly, even if it was true, who on earth would care? How would it affect the quality of the music? Liking something because the musician "tried really hard" is just about the last criterion I would use, and I'm not even sure it's particularly complementary - it's like being awarded the "most improved" medal in your sports team. Trying hard does not equate to scoring goals.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Friday, 10 September 2004 05:41 (twenty-one years ago)

I'm saying that from a technical view, it's just modern pop/rock songs. Anybody who has picked up an instrument can tell you that. Nothing wrong with that. Whether it's effective or not is up to you. (And yes, I listen to alot of artists like this.)

"How would it affect the quality of the music? Liking something because the musician "tried really hard" is just about the last criterion I would use, and I'm not even sure it's particularly complementary"

So, music critics should just not even think about the technical aspect of things? Technicality IS the "quality" of the music to the public. The intelligent song writing. You can walk up to somebody and say that, technically, X person in X band is a great guitar player. And, assuming you have basic knowledge of guitar players, this is a fact because ANYBODY who has basic knowledge of guitar players will agree. It's universal quality. How it makes you FEEL is the opinion.

And no, I'm not going to listen to something beacuse it is technical if it doesn't affect me. But I'm also not going to write a review of how bland the album is without even considering that they, themselves are good musicians and not totally worthless.

I mean, honestly, if you read a review of an album you have been intrested in for some time, and it says that it's unemotional, whatever but still is technically amazing are you not going to see if you agree that it's not effective? (Say this is the one who does consider the technical side.)


And how about if instead they wrote a review that said it was not moving at all and doesn't consider the technical aspects...would you still even bother with it? I know I wouldn't.

So yes, I think it is necessary in order to give a non biasreview. But I suppose we're getting off topic now.

seahorse genius (seahorse genius), Friday, 10 September 2004 07:06 (twenty-one years ago)

Frank Kogan (who has no qualms about using his technical knowledge as a musician in his writing, but who also knows that separating technical stuff from the social world that music happens in makes no sense whatsoever {though I *hope* nobody is trying to suggest that here}), from another thread (he posted this a couple days ago, and I think it applies here, so I am cutting and pasting it):

>>I'll listen and take notes first, sometimes blind (not even knowing whom I'm listening to), then gather info. Promo sheets can be useful, but you have to bear in mind that their purpose is to try to get you to perceive the music in a certain way so that your review will send a pre-chosen message. (There's nothing inherently wrong with promo sheets playing that role; you just have to use your own judgment when reading.) And knowing lots about music and social contexts in general (which frankly I never feel I know very well) is more important than doing particular research on a particular band. And info gained from living your life and keeping eyes and ears open may be more crucial than any specific band- or genre-related research you do. And some unsolicited advice: The basic review game Name the genre, laud or criticize band for living/not living up to it, or laud/critice band for crossing genre boundaries, is really old and tired; so's the shtick of lauding band for resisting commercial or social pressure (or lauding yourself for resisting the same in your review)(or lauding yourself for resisting the impulse to do the foregoing), or criticizing the band for not resisting. Not that I don't do such things plenty in my reviews, since often I don't know what to say.
-- Frank Kogan (edcasua...), September 8th, 2004.

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 15:32 (twenty-one years ago)

i hope i can write more later (i'm in a pinch at work), but suffice to say for the moment that the work this sort of criticism would be doing is less about reviewing a piece of music's "worth" or purchase-value as explaining how it functions.

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chuck, how do you think frank's comments fit into the concerns of this thread?

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 15:35 (twenty-one years ago)

I think Frank's generalizing a little in saying that writing about whether a band lives up to the genre they're attempting is tired. Personally, I couldn't see reviewing the Zolar X album without talking about whether it's a good glam album or not.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Friday, 10 September 2004 15:40 (twenty-one years ago)

I think it's not suffice to say that. I think you could speak of the mechanics of a piece of music just as you would speak to the mechanics of lyrics. Just as one might praise, I don't know, "Eleanor Rigby", for demonstrating Paul McCartney could write interesting, perceptive lyrics, with a sophisticated use of words and meter, I think you could also praise its string arrangement as living up to that sophistication. The arrangement itself is the most interesting part about the music in that song, because the actual chord progression is beyond simple.

At the point when music structure and arrangement becomes that closely linked to my experience with it, it's unfair/irresponsible/borderline dishonest *not* to mention it. And I think this happens a lot more than a lot of music writers give credit for it.

Dominique (dleone), Friday, 10 September 2004 15:43 (twenty-one years ago)

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Dominique (dleone), Friday, 10 September 2004 15:43 (twenty-one years ago)

But what if it's a good prog album instead? (Actually, it's kinda both. And what if they accomplish something *other* than what they attempt? If you even know what they were attempting; you're no mind reader, you know, Tim. And bands lie in interviews all the time.)

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chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 15:44 (twenty-one years ago)

>less about reviewing a piece of music's "worth" or purchase-value as explaining how it functions.<

I don't understand how one negates the other at all.

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 15:46 (twenty-one years ago)

No, you're right. I was just looking for an example.

I actually watched a little of that old PBS documentary on rock and roll last night and there was an interview with George Martin. He said that the strings on "Eleanor Rigby" were influenced by Bernard Herrman. The staccato strings, like the Psycho soundtrack! I never realized that.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Friday, 10 September 2004 15:47 (twenty-one years ago)

Chuck, when you get to the point where you believe the band is doing something they didn't intend to do, discussing the music formally becomes even more interesting, even more relevant to evaluating the music than it might have been before. ie, "Prog Band X has constructed a bloated piece of crap, featuring all the hallmarks of voice-leading and lazy melodicism common in the immature works of Composer and Band Y - funny then that they should title their album Totally New and Uncompromising Stuff."

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Dominique (dleone), Friday, 10 September 2004 15:48 (twenty-one years ago)

i'm not saying we should forgo evaluation, just that it should be just one of things we're doing, and that the primary function should be to understand how the music functions, which requires us to do a lot of thinking prior to evaluation, or at least consciously putting it aside.

obv. this sort of criticism would not serve the same function as a consumer guide or even a record review. i don't expect it to serve the same function.

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 15:52 (twenty-one years ago)

i used the word "function" too many times and in too many senses. sorry.

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 15:53 (twenty-one years ago)

anyway, i'm better with thinking practically than theoretically, so i am working on some other examples like the one in my first post to this thread.

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 15:54 (twenty-one years ago)

>i'm not saying we should forgo evaluation, just that it should be just one of things we're doing, and that the primary function should be to understand how the music functions, which requires us to do a lot of thinking prior to evaluation<

How does good rock criticism (whether it uses technical knowledge of music as its main tool or not) not already do this? (Not sure what "a lot of thinking prior to evaulation" means, though, since I have no idea how a writer could detach herself from her musical preferences, whether she actually incorporates them into her writing or not. And I don't understand what is *lost* by the act of incoporating them. And of course, evaluation *is* part of thinking, in and of itself.)

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:05 (twenty-one years ago)

And why is "consumer guide" so obviously not part of "how music functions"? (It doesn't *have* to be part of it, of course; I'm not saying that.)

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:07 (twenty-one years ago)

I mean, music functions in a social world. And part of what happens in that social world are questions like: is this worth buying, is it worth dancing to, should I change the radio station, can i play this when my mom is home, will kids at school make fun of me for this, will i need to change my hairstyle, and stuff like that. music doesn't exist in a vaccuum. at least no music i've ever heard does.

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:11 (twenty-one years ago)

How does good rock criticism (whether it uses technical knowledge of music as its main tool or not) not already do this?

see my first example for, um, an example of where contemporary criticism possibly comes up short!

instead of saying "she sold out" or "she didn't sell out" or "this music is great!" or "it sucks!" (all more or less evaluative statements) why don't we talk about how the music works as music, and how its functioning differs from her earlier records.

i don't know why you are so combative. i'm not trying to put you out of a job or anything!

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:15 (twenty-one years ago)

i mean, i'm not saying that you can't or shouldn't continue to practice the criticism you're practicing. i'm not making a *destructive* argument. i'm just pimping for the possibility of another kind of criticism which might be able to address some things that most criticism nowadays doesn't quite address. plurality, dude.

this is what i meant when i said you react to all criticism/comment defensively, as if someone is directly criticizing you.

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:17 (twenty-one years ago)

when i write "how music functions," i mean something fiarly specific, which i think i've outlined above. maybe "functions" is not the best word. i even acknowledged that it's not the best word.

chuck, why don't you come up with an example as per my request at the beginning of this thread? i'd like to hear it!

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:18 (twenty-one years ago)

as for the issue of "evaluation," well, it's similar to the question of objectivity. is absolute objectivity possible? no. is striving for a reasonable measure of objectivity in your writing necessary? absolutely, for certain kinds of writing. i'm suggesting that there would be a use for a kind of music writing that aimed more for explanation than judgement.

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:21 (twenty-one years ago)

i think nabisco does this well (i.e. explanation largely w/o judgment) in some of his posts. especially his explanations of the post-rock and indie-pop phenomena.

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:22 (twenty-one years ago)

I'm not being combative or defensive at all, amateurist (though no matter how I disagree you, you'll say I am); I'm just dumbfounded: Do you understand that LOTS of rock criticism already "talks about how the music works as music, and how its functioning differs from earlier records"? And yes, of course, there are LOTS of examples where contemporary crit comes short. Most rock criticism totally sucks! By why judge all criticism by its worst examples? I don't get that. And yes, I think "technical evaluation" is a GOOD thing. I've said that repeatedly; never once argued otherwise. I respect critics who can do it well. It SHOULD be part of music criticism. And it is! And so are lots of other things, many of them just as worthwhile!

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:23 (twenty-one years ago)

very little contemporary criticism is of the kind i am recommending here, and which would answer the problem posed in my first example.

even if we judge criticism by its best examples (christgau?) there are lots of things it doesn't help me to understand.

And yes, I think "technical evaluation" is a GOOD thing. I've said that repeatedly; never once argued otherwise. I respect critics who can do it well. It SHOULD be part of music criticism. And it is! And so are lots of other things, many of them just as worthwhile!

so what are we arguing about? i agree.

(although i do feel that "technical evaluation" is more necessary now than other forms, with which we are already saturated and which have often descended into increasingly uncommunicative mannerisms. but that's a side point. my main point is just that it'd be nice to see some "technical evaluation" alongside the other forms of criticism. that's all.)

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:30 (twenty-one years ago)

shit. i just started reading this thread and have no patience to read the whole thing. but...

mostly clean gave an example of what I think is a good direction to go in:

"New More Informed Crit: This song rocks because the chords behind the guitar line make it sound like the tonal center is shifting which is spacy and cool. "

this is i think, right on the money. It's not overly theoretical, but it provides a reason for the feeling.

what makes a good music listener? does some theory help? I mean, you dont have to be classically trained, god knows i'm not, but what about a basic knowledge of intervals and rhythm?

what about a good reader? would you say that a good reader knows something about the theoretical elements of a story? character development, theme, symbols, images, conflict and resolution?

I would say yes to both. a little bit of begining theory goes a long way and is really valuable. I'd love to see music criticism in the style of the New More Informed Critic.

(i agree amateur!!st :) )

AaronK (AaronK), Friday, 10 September 2004 16:32 (twenty-one years ago)

I recommend that people read this piece:

http://www.villagevoice.com/issues/0252/kogan.php

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:39 (twenty-one years ago)

And this one:

http://www.villagevoice.com/issues/0002/kogan.php

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:42 (twenty-one years ago)

i'll have to read those articles later, but this graf:

On Six by Seven's The Way I Feel Today, the singer puts Everlys-Beatles wiggles in his voice, but sings wistfully pale, so you think of sweet beauty off in the sorrowful mist; but the band will insert drones and dissonance. And then they'll hit you with a fast hard loud punk track. And then go back to fey'd-out McCartney, then grinding sound layers reminiscent of Sonic Youth. And then a Dylanesque voice through the roar. Tuneful sadness, at all speeds and volumes.

is descriptive in an impressionistic sense, not in a precise musicological sense. so it's limited in its ability to get me to understand how the music he's discussing works. not to say it doesn't achieve other things!!!!!!!! (i cannot make that point enough, apparently.)

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 16:44 (twenty-one years ago)

(A quick interjection to say that that's one of the best descriptions of Six by Seven I've read -- love those guys.)

Ned Raggett (Ned), Friday, 10 September 2004 16:58 (twenty-one years ago)

This thread is maddening, wonderful, and futile. So what i think ama would want to see from the above is maybe something like then grinding sound layers, Tonebone-distorted guitars playing chugging eighth-note parallel open-fifths on those big chunky low strings, reminiscent of Sonic Youth. Tonebone has long been noted for its overdriven sound, for instance, on the following famous songs by Robben Ford, which serve as a reference for this artist: etc... Open-fifths were long discouraged in western tonality because of their indelicacy but they do produce an open sound that pops out at contemporary listeners, as evidenced by this track, etc... etc...
(NB I have not heard the track in question, was just making up stuff for examples) But somebody can always say, "that doesn't sound 'grinding'/'chugging'/'reminiscent of Sonic Youth' to me'!" no matter how hard the writer endeavors or how much evidence she accumulates to "prove" it to them.

comme personne (common_person), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:09 (twenty-one years ago)

And therefore any conclusions the reviewer draws about the track are subject to being treated as an value judgement. I think. Maybe not.

comme personne (common_person), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:12 (twenty-one years ago)

I think that amateurist is overrating what it's possible to do with a strictly musicological description. The musicological vocabulary has evolved to describe a particular tradition of music, ie., classical. And it is very good at describing that, at least until you get to some of the more recent avant-garde stuff. However, to try and take that language and apply it to popular music is only going to get you so far. I don't think there is a precise musicological vocabulary for describing things like the sneer in Eminem's voice on a particular line or the way a certain sped-up reggae sample juxtaposes against a gritty drum loop. On the other hand, where appropriate, I'd be interested to see more pop-music reviewers dropping some musicological science. I don't think it's likely to happen though. For one thing, it takes a serious set of stones to lay out a musicological analysis that could be proved wrong. It's like doing a math problem in front of the class. If you say "This song reminds me of This Heat", no one can prove you wrong. But if you say, "This song uses the XYZ chord progression" and it doesn't, someone's going to call you on it.

o. nate (onate), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:15 (twenty-one years ago)

"Tonebone-distorted guitars playing chugging eighth-note parallel open-fifths on those big chunky low strings"


but that's interesting to me! now i know a little bit abt what i'm hearing! and maybe i can be more precise in describing the relations b/t various bands in the future.... i mean, that's a really simple example. i think someone could get a lot more ambitious/even more precise about the components that make up the "sonic youth sound", where they come from, how they've been used differenly, etc.


However, to try and take that language and apply it to popular music is only going to get you so far.

i agree. i think it'd be possible to expand the musicological pallette to explain various musical phenomena in pop/rock though! a friend and i started to develop a kind of musical notation for dub music, based on the different techniques that dub remixers apply to tracks. it only had a glancing relation to classical musical notation but it was potentially useful/interesting (although we never got very far, out of laziness/being otherwise preoccupied).

also some musicologists have developed various sophisticated ways of talking about, say, blues music, or arabic music, that expand greatly upon conventional classical musicology. so anything's possible!!!

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:18 (twenty-one years ago)

Dave Queen drops some precise chord-progression science in this one!:

http://www.villagevoice.com/issues/0431/queen.php

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:20 (twenty-one years ago)

i mean yeah classical musicology has serious limitations! i don't think it could satisfactorily explain the production techniques that make liz phair's new lp differ from her earlier ones. but i think it'd be totally a worthy project to expand/revise the classical musicological ideas to accomodate new musical forms. in fact that's kind of what i had in mind when i ask for a new kind of writing on pop music....

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:20 (twenty-one years ago)

xpost

chuck, that's a cool example! is dave queen the same as dave q???

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:21 (twenty-one years ago)

Yep, same Dave! And also, I'm not sure if he says if that album is good or not! (Which is a *good* thing, right?)

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:23 (twenty-one years ago)

xpost (damn, you guys type fast)

now i'm even more confused.
amateurist, come quick with some examples.
haven't read the vv articles yet, but that quote you pasted was what i thought you wanted. can you rewrite it so it's more what you're after?
to me: "fast, hard, loud" is a very clear description of what's going on musically.
also: "fey'd-out McCartney" is a fairly precise way to explain how the music works. do you want an explanation of what makes it sound "fey"?

m0stly clean (m0stly clean), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:28 (twenty-one years ago)

what makes it sound like mccartney? what musical elements? what instrumentation? what vocal techniques? what revisions of those techniques make it sound "fey"? timbre? phrasing? etc.

(obv the kind of shorthand in that article is somewhat necessary for a short piece like that, which still tries to cover a lot of ground. and some of that kind of impressionistic writing can be fairly precise by the standards of such things. kogan is very good at it, for one. so i'm not suggesting his article is *bad* or anything like that. just that there are other ways to describe things that i'd be interested in reading. that would teach me about different things. that would help me indentify the sources of certain sounds and their purpose within an overall structure of a piece of music.)

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:33 (twenty-one years ago)

to me: "fast, hard, loud" is a very clear description of what's going on musically

But how fast, how hard, how loud? I actually wouldn't mind seeing more quantification in record reviews. For example, when discussing a song, why not provide BPM, dynamic range in db, number of times the chorus is repeated, and so on? It would be interesting to see a critic try and find out how many possible ways of quantifying a piece of music they could find.

o. nate (onate), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:34 (twenty-one years ago)

...if for no other reason, it forces the writer to discover if they're actually saying what they think they are. "Fast, hard, loud"? So, like Minor Threat? Or Maynard Ferguson's band?

Dominique (dleone), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:36 (twenty-one years ago)

fyi, "a short piece like that" = 4237 words!!! (Which equation may explain a lot.)

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:38 (twenty-one years ago)

Chuck, I have mentioned previously that Dave's mention of the VI chord in "Jessie's Girl" is incorrect! It is actually a vi chord!

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:39 (twenty-one years ago)

(Upper case is major; lower case is minor.) : )

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:41 (twenty-one years ago)

I have just been reminded that it's long overdue of me to start the Dave Q fan page.

Ned Raggett (Ned), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:42 (twenty-one years ago)

(xpost)
but i think it'd be totally a worthy project to expand/revise the classical musicological ideas to accomodate new musical forms. in fact that's kind of what i had in mind when i ask for a new kind of writing on pop music....

Bhat's cool, but I think what makes classical technical criticism (musicological as it being called on this thread, I'm not sure that's really the right way to use that word) work on western classical music is that western classical music has traditionally (not anymore, of course) had an agreed upon set of, well, *right* and *wrong* things to do against which the music could be judged. And that set of rights and wrongs has now, long after the fact, been "understood" and codified and set down, so that musicological criticism written of those works now *looks* so informative and enlightening vis a vis the effects of the music.

As it was being written, did the criticism of these classical artists tend toward the technical-musicological? Or were their critics writing impressionistically at the time? "the new mazurka by Chopin has the edges sanded off..." I've read some old criticism for classes but my recall of it isn't quick enough for this post...

Maybe (probably) there are other musics that also have this agreed-upon set of right/wrong/goals/techniques, but is pop one of them? Can any music being discussed/performed/recorded/listened to in the present be one of them without egregious calling out of value judgements?

comme personne (common_person), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:42 (twenty-one years ago)

gah, despite my best efforts and intentions my post would have this thread spin off into directions neither I nor its OP nor anyone else probably want it to go, because they've already spent enough time there

comme personne (common_person), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:46 (twenty-one years ago)

i don't think classical notation is evaluative (right/wrong)--it's just a way of putting musical ideas down on paper. v. important for a time before recording. there are certain things you can't really notate; sometimes that means people weren't encouraged to use them, sometimes it just means the performer/conductor has to step in and make decisions about how the piece should sound.

the theory def. needs to change to fit the object under discussion. and it has! there's a lot of musicology that really departs from classical musical notation. just lot a whole lot of it relating to pop music (again, as opposed to blues, or arabic music, or hindi music, or whatever)

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:49 (twenty-one years ago)

"Jessie's Girl" - I-V-vi-IV-V-I
"Sweet Jane" - I-V-IV-vi-V-I

He's right that they're similar, though!

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:50 (twenty-one years ago)

i don't think classical notation is evaluative (right/wrong)
If this is a response to what I wrote (and not to a post that I missed) then: This isn't what I'm trying to say; I meant to refer to the set of rules of that one learns in harmony classes -- the rules of western tonality as they developed over the centuries. Voice leading and its ilk.

comme personne (common_person), Friday, 10 September 2004 17:55 (twenty-one years ago)

oh ok, well my point is that you can transcend that by developing other ways of explaining musical effects in pop music. (there are some aspects of classical musical theory that are totally appropriate to pop music, some aspects that aren't, and lots of places where there just isn't anything in the theory to explain what goes on in a modern pop song. hence my friend and i trying to develop an alternative notational system for dub reggae!)

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:57 (twenty-one years ago)

>"Jessie's Girl" - I-V-vi-IV-V-I
"Sweet Jane" - I-V-IV-vi-V-I
He's right that they're similar, though! <

Can you notate the opening riff in "Down Boys" by Warrant now? I'm curious!

chuck, Friday, 10 September 2004 17:59 (twenty-one years ago)

now we're cooking!!

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 18:00 (twenty-one years ago)

btw, "musicology" != "music theory"

or, I should say it doesn't only equal music theory, taking into account cultural and historical aspects of music (ie, if chemistry, biology and physics are the "theory" of people, then musicology is more like sociology or psychology)

Dominique (dleone), Friday, 10 September 2004 18:00 (twenty-one years ago)

(i think we need to use little caricatures of reggae superstars for our dub reggae notational system. so like when a flange comes in, that's marked by a johnnie clarke head. a double flange is two johnnie clarke heads. a backwards snare is a tappa zukie.)

dominique: that's true. i've been stupidly conflating music theory and musicology. i wish i had my terms a bit straighter. thanks for the correction.

amateur!!st, Friday, 10 September 2004 18:02 (twenty-one years ago)

oh that's ok. I think I disagree slightly with what you're saying above though, about how there's sometimes no way to explain what's happening in music. Usually, there is a way to explain what is happening, it's the "why" that gets confusing. I just don't happen to believe theory is a "why" kind of discipline in most cases.

Dominique (dleone), Friday, 10 September 2004 18:08 (twenty-one years ago)

I tried listening to the sample of "Down Boys" on iTunes, but I'm on dialup and it keeps breaking up. Definitely a two bar repeating progression similar to "Sweet Jane" and "Jessie's Girl," though. YOU ARE CORRECT.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Friday, 10 September 2004 18:17 (twenty-one years ago)

i just plain flat out do not care about fifths or upbeats or thirds to fifths or minors or harmonic palettes. why should i give a shit about the structure to bizarre love triangle? or the roots of the feelies' polyrhythms? or want pick apart a song or artist until it's/they're just a piece of meat graded on its "quality".

frankE, here's my attempt to answer why you actually might care (it's "Death Rock 2000," the second piece of mine that Chuck linked to above).

Technical vocabulary is neither good nor bad; like anything else, you need to make it part of a story or an idea. That is, if you say "Writer X uses a lot of compound adjectives," you haven't said much unless you say to what effect he uses them (though merely pointing out the use of those adjectives might nonetheless inspire someone else to go, "You're right; he does use a lot of compound adjectives; I wonder to what effect?")

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Saturday, 11 September 2004 06:35 (twenty-one years ago)

"The singer puts Everlys-Beatles wiggles in his voice" is neither impressionistic nor precisely theoretical. It gives the reader at least a chance at guessing what kind of wiggles he'll be hearing, since he can probably recall the Beatles and Everlys melismas. Would it help to be more specific ("you know, like in 'Cathy's Clown' and 'All I've Got to Do'")? [If that's right. I've misfiled that Six By Seven record and can't check.] Probably not in this piece, since it would take up space and clog up the sentence, and I don't see that the reader needs the specificity. And especially I don't see him needing to know that the Everlys go "la-so-la-so-mi." However, if I were doing a piece on the influence of "Cathy's Clown" on the Beatles, I might want to say something that precise and then explore - which I haven't done - how often the Beatles sing that particular melisma, how often they do something similar (the so-la-so-mi part could be generalized as "first note, higher note, back to first note, lower note," but not necessarily those notes; or inverted to "first note, lower note, back to first note, higher note"), who else was doing it, what made the Beatles seem more Cathy's Clownish than gospelish, etc. I think this is the sort of thing that Tim Ellison is asking for: The Everlys and Beatles pull something off. How do they do it? How often do they do that particular thing or something close to it?

You still might reasonably ask "So what?" But someone might be able to answer that question in an interesting way, once the phenomenon has been pointed out.

Not sure what Amateurist means by "problems," though I think "Death Rock 2000" states a couple, and states them as both formal problems and social problems, in that the relation isn't simply between musical elements but between people. ("Tensions" might be a better word than "problems," in that one plays with the tensions without any wish to "solve" them.) A lesson I hoped to impart was that not only is the "audience" literally part of the form of the music in call-and-response, but by analogy the audience can be part of the musical form even when not there at the music's creation. E.g., dance records. If you're making the record to accompany a particular dance step, or for a particular milieu, you're making it in relation to a particular response, even if the responder isn't in the room with you (and even if in actuality the record gets a different response). This is similar to what Tim Finney is saying.

Here's a small question (better word than "problem" for this one): When I first heard "Cathy's Clown" (1960), which was maybe a decade after I first heard the Beatles, I thought I'd discovered the Rosetta Stone. "That's where the Beatles got it from." But I never followed up, never actually tried to figure out how often and how closely the Beatles were doing "Cathy's Clown," or what other antecedents there might be. My question could be, why does it sound so Beatle-like?.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Saturday, 11 September 2004 07:48 (twenty-one years ago)

I'm interested to know whether amateurist thinks *dance* music criticism generally is not formalist enough. Obviously things aren't really expressed in classical music theory terms (eg. chord progressions) but it's rare that you find reviews of particular dance tracks in dance magazine that don't break down the role of the snares, the bass line, the kick drum etc. in making the track what it is. If anything, as someone who in default setting tends to approach most music if it were dance music, I always worry that my own criticism is *too* formalist, rather than not formalist enough.

Tim Finney (Tim Finney), Saturday, 11 September 2004 08:50 (twenty-one years ago)

http://www.freakytrigger.co.uk/nylpm/2004_09_01_nylpm_archive.html#109481234466309688

cºzen (Cozen), Saturday, 11 September 2004 10:59 (twenty-one years ago)

Frank, I don't know. Obviously, the melisma on the word "do" in "All I've gotta do" is a different melody than the melisma on the word "love" in the line "Don't want your love anymore" in "Cathy's Clown." They both begin on the downbeat of the measure, though. Hearing them in my head just now, I'm wondering if both of those songs were performed in the same key? That can be significant. (I was noting to my wife just yesterday how the popular Postal Service song that they're playing on the radio now has the melody from some old song by Chicago. I wonder if those two songs are in the same key, too.) "All I've Gotta Do" and "Cathy's Clown" both run at about the same tempo, too, I think.

The drums in the recurring bridge in "Cathy's Clown" (you know, like the one that starts, "I"ve gotta stand tall" etc.) also sounds like the Beatles to me. Not sure what song, though.

There might be other "Cathy's Clown" elements in Beatles songs, too, but I'm not sure where offhand. Something about the verse structure and the way it's sung in harmony? (I do know that the Beatles played the song in their early days.)

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Saturday, 11 September 2004 16:07 (twenty-one years ago)

"They both begin on the downbeat of the measure, though."

And, of course, they both have a descending melismatic trajectory.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Saturday, 11 September 2004 16:22 (twenty-one years ago)

And they both use the same notes, but not in the same rhythm, which is why the melody isn't identical (and "All I've Got to Do" adds a couple more at the end).

What I'm wondering - idly - is, if I heard wiggles with family resemblances to Clown-Do, would they generally register to me as Everly-Beatles voice wiggles, or old rock 'n' roll, or what? (Wish I could find that Six By Seven CD.) (And though the piece isn't short, the treatment of Six By Seven is short, as is the treatment of each of the other 24 bands I mentioned, so Amateurist is right about my working with space constraints. But even if I hadn't been, in that context [i.e., not raising the specific Beatles-Everlys question that I raise on this thread] I wouldn't have gotten more technical.)

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Sunday, 12 September 2004 00:14 (twenty-one years ago)

It's interesting. Those two melodies really only share the fact that they use the 6th, 5th, and 3rd of the scale. The Beatles melisma starts on the 7th and heads down, though, while the Everlys one starts on the 6th. And they're over different chords.

Somehow, it still seems like it might be a "Cathy's Clown"-ism, though. The fact that they both have that pentatonic-like skipping of the fourth in the melody might be significant.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Sunday, 12 September 2004 00:41 (twenty-one years ago)

Also: My wife pointed out that the melismas on each of those single syllables are really the only significant part of the melodies for both of those lines.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Sunday, 12 September 2004 01:54 (twenty-one years ago)

Or most significant, anyway.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Sunday, 12 September 2004 02:00 (twenty-one years ago)

I don't feel qualified to post much to this thread by virtue of: (a) not knowing music theory and (b) not reading much music criticsm (which ILMers will then have the nerve to call me on if I start generalizing about it wildly). However, I really like it when someone who knows music theory can give me a name for some phenomenon I'm hearing but can only describe in idiosyncratic terms. For instance, there's this brilliant transition in Grupo Niche's "Cielo de Tambores" (the best track of the 90's according to my ballot) that almost never fails to send me. Paul in Santa Cruz explained it this way (and I hope he will forgive me for quoting from a personal e-mail): "The more 'folkloric' [the term I was using] part in the middle corresponds to a shift from D minor to D major, and an interesting thing around 3:15 [the point where this incredible transition happens] is that it shifts back to minor, but now the key is F minor instead of D minor. In music-theory terms, D major to F minor is an instance of the most distant of all possible key relations." There's a lot of other stuff happening there that can be described in non-technical terms, but that's a harmonic quality that I think I'm responding to, even though I certainly had no clue about the details Paul was able to explain.

(Since I don't know music theory, I'm not sure how exciting I would be if I were reading this about a song I had never heard though.)

Rockist_Scientist (rockist_scientist), Sunday, 12 September 2004 02:44 (twenty-one years ago)

Actually, it sometimes helps for me to listen to the song rather than to rely on memory. Turns out that "Not a Second Time" is closer to "Cathy's Clown" than "All I've Got to Do" is. Well, depends what I mean by "closer"; "Not a Second Time" has an up-down-up-down wiggle, whereas "All I've Got to Do" has a somewhat less wigglish wiggle, but it hits the Cathy notes of the scale. Now I'm off to search for the philosophical argument that will destroy Amateurist's impressionistic criticism vs. formal criticism dichotomy.

Here's the argument in brief: It's possible that "Cathy's Clown" is the source of the Beatles vocal wiggle even if no Beatles song ever had the precise notes of the Cathy wiggle.

(Polanyi, Kuhn, and Wittgenstein to thread.)

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Monday, 13 September 2004 16:26 (twenty-one years ago)

Now I'm off to search for the philosophical argument that will destroy Amateurist's impressionistic criticism vs. formal criticism dichotomy.

well, i don't mean to suggest that there isn't considerable overlap. it's less a matter of formal vs. impressionistic than precise vs. imprecise. i could stand for crticism, not to forgo evaluation, but to perhaps deemphasize it to make room (since there are always space constraints) for more precise stylistic description and careful arguments based on same.

amateur!!st, Monday, 13 September 2004 16:32 (twenty-one years ago)

for example, could someone explain in precise terms (not exclusively borrowed from classical music theory) the differences between the rapping styles of ghostface, meth, and raekwon? they all have distinctive ways of pacing, rapping against the beat, etc. etc. which one can easily hear but i'm hard-pressed to explain precisely. i.e. in such a way that one could almost repeat back something approximating their style of flow from a description (obv. a really good and conclusive analysis would also have to talk about what they're saying and how this transforms and is transformed by how they're saying it).

amateur!!st, Monday, 13 September 2004 16:34 (twenty-one years ago)

i mean, jess has come awfully close in his discussion on ghostface et al. he seems to have listened harder than almost anyone else, and that's paid off in beig able to describe the music in ways that really helps me to understand it. but i think we could go much farther.

amateur!!st, Monday, 13 September 2004 16:36 (twenty-one years ago)

What you can do is give a somewhat precise example of what, say, the Beatles do that sound like "Everly-Beatles" wiggles, and that might help someone who hadn't heard that particular example recreate it, somewhat, if you told them the notes. And then you can say, "and they and other performers do a bunch of similar things that I call 'Everly-Beatles wiggles." But I could never come up with a rule that specified when something was enough like my examples to count as Everly-Beatles wiggles and when it wasn't, and people could disagree. So evaluation is inescapable. Ultimate precision is impossible, and not just because no terminology can adequately convey sound, esp. can't convey timbre, syncopation, etc., but because any example will be too precise. For example, you can't say "if it goes la-so-la-so-mi it's an Everlys-Beatles wiggle, and if it doesn't, it isn't," since most of the Everlys-Beatles wiggles go otherwise. But then, there are some wiggles by the Beatles that I wouldn't call "Everlys-Beatles wiggles," e.g. "ro-oh-oad" in "Why Don't We Do It in the Road."

Also, for descriptive purposes, "Everly-Beatles' vocal wiggles" conveys the sound far better than does "la-so-la-so-mi" to anyone who's heard the Everlys and Beatles, since 99.999% of the readers (incl. me) would either be completely at a loss reading "la-so-la-so-mi" or they'd have to spend time translating it (and anyway it leaves out the rhythm, so you still don't get the riff). But, again, what you write depends on what question you're asking, what you're trying to accomplish.

Frank Kogan (Frank Kogan), Monday, 13 September 2004 21:50 (twenty-one years ago)

amateurist, in my popular music studies class last year, we glanced at the work of grad students or profs who'd done just that - e.g. graphed out Dylan's intonation patterns or mapped out the patterns of Patti Smith's accenting in "Gloria". It really seems like what you're looking for is what's going on in academic study of pop.

sundar subramanian (sundar), Monday, 13 September 2004 21:53 (twenty-one years ago)

where is this academic study of pop happening? are there papers? conferences? i had no idea! tell me more!!

amateur!!!st (amateurist), Tuesday, 14 September 2004 03:58 (twenty-one years ago)

re. melismatic wiggles, couldn't you talk about "steps"--their size and frequency and overall patterning?

amateur!!!st (amateurist), Tuesday, 14 September 2004 03:58 (twenty-one years ago)

The "Not a Second Time" melisma (I assume you're talking about the one on the word "why" in "I see no use in wondering why") also has that pentatonic-like aspect, skipping the fourth on its way down. The fact that it's got the seventh in there, though, makes it less country sounding than "Cathy's Clown." Same is true of "All I've Got to Do."

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Tuesday, 14 September 2004 04:11 (twenty-one years ago)

Putting the seventh in there! Didn't they know they were ruining rock and roll!

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Tuesday, 14 September 2004 04:17 (twenty-one years ago)

amateurist: I can think of no better starting place than this. The reference info for the essay about "Gloria", for example, comes up if you go to Bibliographies -> Gilbert B. Rodman's bibliography -> D-G.

sundar subramanian (sundar), Tuesday, 14 September 2004 04:21 (twenty-one years ago)

To a certain extent I think Amateurist is right in that he's just asking for people to be more explicit in their explanations of WHY things affect them and at the same time is calling on critics to be knowledgeable, two things that I can't help but think could be used to great positive effect by many critics who are already great.

djdee2005 (djdee2005), Tuesday, 14 September 2004 05:39 (twenty-one years ago)

[Steely Dan: "Steely Dan's name has been popping up as a hip musical crush. Remember, this glossy bop-pop was the indifferent aristocracy to punk rock's stone-throwing in the late 70's. People fought and died so our generation could listen to something better. "]

another "problem": explain exactly which set of music proclivities induce people to call steely dan "slick"

amateur!!!st (amateurist), Wednesday, 15 September 2004 06:34 (twenty-one years ago)

It's got to be instrumental timbre + playing accuracy/virtuosity, no? It would be interesting to know which particular instrument + amplification sounds factor into it with SD.

Tim Ellison (Tim Ellison), Wednesday, 15 September 2004 14:56 (twenty-one years ago)

When I saw this thread’s title I was thrown for a loop, imagining it would address the critical mode I might have employed pitching something to Art Forum in 1991 referencing Lacan’s "Ecrits" as a refractory text to address Donald Judd’s box art.

Which is my point, sorta. Whether you’re getting all musicologically formalist, or using deconstruction-y and/or heavy theory means to address the music at hand, you’re gonna leave some people going Wha?, or risk adopting an exposition heavy lecture on readers who will rightly despise you for it, or seem a self-satisfied prick.

Then there’s the problem/challenge of subjectivity, which I think no reviewer can be humble about enough, and, for me, is the most odious thing in music writing, except when it works. (I’m thinking James Baldwin’s essays on film, Mikal Gilmore’s "Night Music", or Andrew Vachss’ first-person in-novel odes to Judy Henske.)

To me, the main villain is word count, which superimposing a style right off, most often characterized by pushing the language/reference envelope at all times to create a sort of expressionistic sense of the musical piece, but most often at the expense of conveying basic considerations like, Dude, does this suck or what?

Which, in the extreme, leaves you with writing for academia or Maxim.

Me, I’d love to write about music from a sort of psycho-acoustic pathology POV, but I doubt I’m gonna find many buyers that way. It would be formalistic tho.

ian g, Wednesday, 15 September 2004 20:33 (twenty-one years ago)

my post above should read "musical proclivities"

sorry ian not ignoring your post--will post more later

amateur!!st, Wednesday, 15 September 2004 20:39 (twenty-one years ago)

don't feel ignored now--thanks

ian g, Wednesday, 15 September 2004 20:50 (twenty-one years ago)

The best music theory analysis of the Beatles exists here

mentalist (mentalist), Thursday, 16 September 2004 03:32 (twenty-one years ago)

ian i didn't finish yr post...too high a word count.

djdee2005 (djdee2005), Thursday, 16 September 2004 05:39 (twenty-one years ago)

mentalist: awesome. thank you.

AaronK (AaronK), Thursday, 16 September 2004 13:29 (twenty-one years ago)

"feeling" and "thinking" shouldn't be set against each other like dogs

OTM OTM OTM OTM OTM

Dan Perry '08 (Dan Perry), Thursday, 16 September 2004 13:32 (twenty-one years ago)

i couldnt read the whole thread but i feel you amat. so i'm blindly throwing this out there. a) pop music isn't dead yet, b) pop music didn't arise from the academic culture that breeds formalist critics, c) academics generally (generally) condescend pop, though it isn't omitted from academic forums at all.
i posted abt these before, but there's a book abt dylan i got based on a j. lethem review but haven't yet read. Ricks ("the great British literary critic") supposedly does a damn good job reading Dylan against Tennyson, etc, and the seven deadly sins. Lots of jackasses have tried it, and one succeeds.
as for more current music Adam Krim wrote a book called Rap Music and the Poetics of Identity, or something. I thought he was way off base most of the book, but he presents a fantastic general notion that Pop Matters wishes it could touch. His theory is that classical music theory is now a dead system (post serialists, bcs he discludes modern composers, for whom the genres of music theory decay. the difference btwn academically condescended "middlebrow" "IDM" and a theoretically modern composition would often not exist if someone arranged IDM differently) and now even theory should fall under Musicology, which would branch out fairly to all forms of music, because artistic merit cannot be rationed by faggots who condescend anything they think is "low" because they smack a bitch and say faggot.
my reverse classism is obviously getting the better of my writing here.

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 15:52 (twenty-one years ago)

i was offbase on that idm comment obv. hella academic books have been written abt microacoustics as the future of music

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 15:55 (twenty-one years ago)

I DONT THINK ANYONE SHOULD WRITE A FORMAL CRITICISM OF LIZ PHAIR FOR AT LEAST A FEW DECADES

peter $., Thursday, 16 September 2004 15:56 (twenty-one years ago)

but i think formal criticism of rap is absolutely necessary for the survival of american culture

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 15:56 (twenty-one years ago)

or an academic embrace, at least. the problem is that rap destroys genres more basically than dylan or liz

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 15:58 (twenty-one years ago)

is rap modern literature that's culturally infused with knowledge unknown for centuries? of course! but we need someone better than adam krim's AZ lovin' ass

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 15:59 (twenty-one years ago)

ethan to thread!

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 16:01 (twenty-one years ago)

ethan if you can hear me go to college and rib all those pretentious fuckasses one by one until you publish a study in some theory periodical abt B.G.!

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 16:03 (twenty-one years ago)

His theory is that classical music theory is now a dead system and now even theory should fall under Musicology, which would branch out fairly to all forms of music

I imagine some musicologists would say this has already happened, at least in theory (npi). In practice, because classical western music theory is so ingrained in academia and so 'known', it will still be taught generally whereas any other systems (like what?) will only be taught via specialization. Maybe time and a poetics of pop can/will change this.

Comme personne (common_person), Thursday, 16 September 2004 16:09 (twenty-one years ago)

Paul de Man to thread :(

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 16:12 (twenty-one years ago)

comme, i too imagine that. i do not think the importance of classical music will or should wane, but music is expanding. new systems of shorthand/comp are evolving that should render sheet music obsolete for the next generation. the new system has no boundaries. music videos. music-literature (dylan and 50).

i do not think the future of music should be all nirvana play-it-by-ear, but i do think microacoustics (not glitch so much as more complex scales. why can't i think of his name... jackson, j-ugh. i can't even think of the name of the scales he was foxing with) and indian/gamalan (sp) (TRITE!) ideas aren't necessarily primitive, and dance music was a result of phillip glass, who obv uses an arpegiator. yeah, i'm getting a little uppity.

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 16:20 (twenty-one years ago)

"via specialization"
who can say w/a straight face that the serialists were the most important composers after sad old mahler? the kids and the africans! who'll write the formal crits that tear down and rebuild the system of music education? smarter iterations of myself.

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 16:23 (twenty-one years ago)

again, i'm not suggesting that pop be analyzed in the terms developed for classical music. i think that's sort of a red herring.

amateur!!st, Thursday, 16 September 2004 16:25 (twenty-one years ago)

POX "problems" in pop music with the need for formal criticism
1) lil scrappy - no problems
the only others i can think of are by roy orbison and the everly brothers :(

but then doesn't everyone review pop formally?

peter $.., Thursday, 16 September 2004 16:29 (twenty-one years ago)

"This fire is burnin'
and it's out of control
It's not a problem you can stop
It's rock n' roll
Suck on that"
-- Axl Rose, 1991

chuck, Thursday, 16 September 2004 17:34 (twenty-one years ago)

amt you mentioned boulez's 'orientations' on that andrew WK thread: so what is he doing in that book other than an analysis of classical in classical music terms? Some of the examples given on this thread seem to be analysis of pop recs in music theory type terms (ones that maybe were developed to describe classical music).

Julio Desouza (jdesouza), Thursday, 16 September 2004 20:09 (twenty-one years ago)

hey julio.

boulez analyzes classical music using a method of formal analysis appropriate to classical music, so a pop equivalent of orientations would analyze pop music using a method of formal analysis appropriate to pop music (developing such a method is itself part of the "project" i'd like to see). my comparison was less about the specific methodology employed by boulez as about the rigor and precision of his thinking, the clarity of his rhetoric, and the ambitiousness of his project, i.e. breaking down a piece of music into all its constituent elements and finding out how it "works." i imagine this could be done for a pop record as well as a symphony.

as i've noted a few times upthread, music theory has already been adapted/revised/rebuilt for the purposes of analyzing different styles of music. the few examples of a precise music criticism that i've mentioned so far (franklin bruno etc.) themselves do this, in a somewhat casual fashion.

amateur!!st, Thursday, 16 September 2004 20:14 (twenty-one years ago)

oh wait axl rose says we oughtn't stop the rock. sorry.

amateur!!!st (amateurist), Friday, 17 September 2004 07:50 (twenty-one years ago)

We could carve up the domain of historical poetics in still other ways. Following R. S. Crane, we could distinguish studies of precompositional factors (sources, influences, cliches, received forms) from compositional ones (normalized principles of combination and transformation within works) and from postcompositional ones (effects, reception, varying responses in different contexts). For example, Noel Burch's To the Distant Observer treats Japanese cinema as the legatee of stylistic practices from earlier centuries, while Vance Kepley's In the Service of the State, using a different precompositional focus, traces more proximate influences on Dovzhenko's films. The work of Charles Musser, Tom Gunning, and Andre Gaudreault has demonstrated that pre-1915 films obey coherent compositional norms. And recent work in reception by Janet Staiger has revealed how audiences' varying construals of the same film presuppose historically variable viewing conventions. In my own studies of Dreyer and Ozu, I have tried to relate the three domains by suggesting historically determinate gaps among them. In the works of Ozu, for instance, source material and contemporary conventions are transformed by specific compositional procedures, but the results have been appropriated differently by various audiences.

Recognizing that linguistic analogies are notoriously shaky in film studies, I will risk one more mapping of the field. Like linguistics, film poetics has its "semantics," the study of how meaning is produced. It has its "syntactics," the study of rules for selecting and combining units (with respect to style, Raymond Bellour's micro-analyses; with respect to compositional form, Thierry Kuntzel's study of openings, Peter Wollen's applications of Propp, or Rick Altman's "dual-focus" narrative). And poetics has its "pragmatics," the study of how relations between viewer and text develop in the process of the film's unfolding (e.g., accounts of narration or of filmic "enunciation"). Meaning, structure, and process--these three aspects of any representational system are also central to poetics.

These equable mappings of the terrain conceal, of course, how much territory is in dispute. I have already suggested several issues about which poeticians wrangle; two more divergences seem to me worth brief discussion.

Across history, poetics has had to steer a course between strictly "immanent" accounts and strictly "subsumptive" ones. Few poeticians have been willing to accept the consequences of an utterly intrinsic account of constructional processes; even Wolfflin, mistakenly treated as the model of the pure formalist, explained changes in artistic styles partly by changes in a culture's visual habits. On the other side, very few poeticians have sought to account for every phenomenon by appeal to processes in other social domains; even the Zhdanovite recognizes some special quality in art. For most poeticians, the constructional principles studied are not self-sealed, but they are also not in every respect subsumable to other principles.

Assuming that the escape hatch of "relative autonomy" is of no help, we can distinguish two tendencies within poetics. One tendency hypothesizes that the phenomenon we study has a considerable degree of self-regulated coherence. The early Shklvosky seems to hold this view; he seeks to explain the laws of fairy tale composition by purely poetic principles like repetition, retardation, and so forth. He gives theoretical priority to such factors. In film poetics, perhaps Burch's Theory of Film Practice approaches this position. The second tendency, articulated by the later Russian Formalists and the Prague Structuralists, gives immanent factors only a methodological priority. For example, as Tynianov and Jakobson point out, even if the immanent evolution of literature can explain the direction of change, it cannot explain timing, which must be governed by extraliterary causes. A comparable position is taken by Staiger, Thompson, and myself in studying the history of the classical Hollywood cinema. Here the analyst looks first to the "immanent" factors that might be the most proximate and pertinent causal factors but also assumes that virtually every explanatory task will require moving to those mediations that lie in "adjacent" domains.

To continue the geographical metaphor, poetics is less a field with distinct boundaries than a kind of Alsace-Lorraine constantly being claimed by interested neighbors. On one side is Aesthetics, which, in the eighteenth century, replaced the study of poetic praxis with a concern for the philosophical problems involved in the creation and appreciation of beauty. On another side lies Semiotics, which seeks to subsume poetics into a general theory of the production of meaning. Interestingly, poeticians have been drafted into both camps. Aristotle, the Russian Formalists, and the Prague Structuralists can play roles in the history of aesthetics, as in Beardsley's survey history, or they can be promoted to the rank of proto-semioticians, as Peter Steiner does.

In my view, the tension between semiotics and aesthetics has been immensely fruitful. There remains, however, a core of questions and issues that cannot be wholly absorbed into the adjacent areas. It is useful to differentiate between the practical theory of an art and the philosophy of it. The "practical theory" of music or poetry, for instance rests upon a posteriori questions, involving empirical generalizations about conventions and practices in these arts. From this perspective, film poetics is a systematizing of theoretical inquiry into cinematic practices as they have existed. The philosophy of an art, on the other hand, inquires into the a priori aspects of it; it involves conceptual analysis of its logical nature and functions. On the whole, aesthetics concentrates upon such matters. As for semiotics, it concentrates on matters of meaning, which is only part of the effects for which a poetics seeks to account; on the other hand, if semiotics seeks to explain "the life of signs in society," it encompasses far more than any poetics can. Yet one should not discourage border crossings; if Barthes' S/Z offers a semiotics and Goodman's Languages of Art offers an aesthetics, both are splendid contributions to poetics.

amateur!!st, Monday, 20 September 2004 19:34 (twenty-one years ago)

Bop began with jazz but one afternoon somewhere on a sidewalk maybe 1939, 1940, Dizzy Gillespie or Charley Parker or Thelonious Monk was walking down past a men's clothing store on 42nd Street or South Main in L.A. and from the loudspeaker they suddenly heard a wild impossible mistake in jazz that only could have been heard inside their own imaginary head, and that is a new art. Bop.

lovebug starski (lovebug starski), Monday, 20 September 2004 20:01 (twenty-one years ago)

the great man theory: the cliff's notes

amateur!!st, Monday, 20 September 2004 20:03 (twenty-one years ago)

two months pass...
Amateurist, have you seen this? http://www.ume.maine.edu/~iaea/esaabstr.html

(apologies if you have)...

Gravel Puzzleworth (Gregory Henry), Monday, 29 November 2004 02:03 (twenty-one years ago)

at cursory glance a lot of that seemed like psuedoscience and naïve formalism.... based on the abstracts of course. but i'll have to look at it more closely.

amateur!!st, Monday, 29 November 2004 06:25 (twenty-one years ago)

two years pass...

This was an interesting thread.

Tim F, Monday, 25 June 2007 14:10 (eighteen years ago)

Except the actual answer was Lionel Hampton.

Marcello Carlin, Monday, 25 June 2007 14:17 (eighteen years ago)

It's possible that "Cathy's Clown" is the source of the Beatles vocal wiggle even if no Beatles song ever had the precise notes of the Cathy wiggle.

is this what's meant by "leaving yrself wiggle room"??

m coleman, Monday, 25 June 2007 14:25 (eighteen years ago)

This is an interesting thread. I guess the stuff I've been doing on production / compression / sound is related to this; it's certainly an attempt to engage with music on a physical / technical level as well as a cultural / personal one. I'm not really interested in just saying "this record sounds bad", but rather "this record sounds bad because..." and then trying to extrapolate reasons for decisions in the process of production.

It's difficult though because I know for every one person who understands it, there are 100 who don't, and not because they can't, but because they don't think they're not bothered.

Scik Mouthy, Monday, 25 June 2007 14:40 (eighteen years ago)

Gordon Brown's probably not bothered about it at the moment.

Marcello Carlin, Monday, 25 June 2007 15:20 (eighteen years ago)

I'm not really interested in just saying "this record sounds bad", but rather "this record sounds bad because..." and then trying to extrapolate reasons for decisions in the process of production IT WAS OVERCOMPRESSED

amirite?

That one guy that quit, Monday, 25 June 2007 15:30 (eighteen years ago)

Not quite. WHY WAS IT OVERCOMPRESSED? is the question.

Scik Mouthy, Monday, 25 June 2007 15:34 (eighteen years ago)

Thrusting Thatcherkids always need a bigger sonic hit.

"Wrongly compressed" might be more apposite here than "overcompressed" since many of the best records of the sixties benefited markedly from the latter.

Marcello Carlin, Monday, 25 June 2007 15:49 (eighteen years ago)

Aye, I'd go along with that. If XTRMNTR was uncompressed it'd sound daft.

Scik Mouthy, Monday, 25 June 2007 15:50 (eighteen years ago)

four years pass...

i like this paragraph from the wikipedia page on usher's climax:

"Climax" is a quiet storm slow jam set in common time.[6][7][8] It is written in the key of C minor, and Usher's voice ranges from B♭3 to G5.[8] The music is built around a haunting riff, complemented by sparse drum machine and some musical accompaniment.[9] Its varying soundscape incorporates electronic effects such as clicks, hisses, whooshes, and low-frequency synths,[6][10] as well as subtle strings and scattered piano notes.[7] Music writers have noted Diplo's production as uncharacteristically reserved and understated.[9][10][11][12]
The song's musical structure is characterized by intervals in which the music builds to a potential break, but softly decrescendos instead.[11] As each verse concludes, the song's snapping, electronic rhythm track gradually softens and rippling synth chords repeat throughout the song.[7] Marc Hogan of Spin writes that Diplo "teases us with the sort of wubba-wubba subwoofer noises that have become inescapable in the past year or so of pop radio. But he never actually gives in with the full dubstep drop [...] the song keeps swelling to one big wave after another, without ever really reaching a single, song-stopping crescendo."[7] Hogan cites the bridge at around the three-minute mark as "the closest thing to a climax" on the song, "when the track gets as quiet as it ever has before becoming as lush as it ever gets."[7] Pitchfork Media's Carrie Battan calls the song "an exercise in the power of restraint", commenting that "Diplo shows uncharacteristic subtlety behind Usher's sentiment, with a beat that seems to hang suspended in midair."[11]

flesh, the devil, and a wolf (wolf) (amateurist), Wednesday, 6 June 2012 11:02 (fourteen years ago)

i mean that isn't exactly what i had in mind when i started this thread but it was kind of refreshing to read in a wikipedia entry.

flesh, the devil, and a wolf (wolf) (amateurist), Wednesday, 6 June 2012 11:31 (fourteen years ago)


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