Elmore Leonard: Bandwagon-jumping bestseller or musical dialogue feller? (Update -- RIP, August 2013)

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I thought I wouldn't like Elmore Leonard - given the movie 'Get Shorty' and the first page of his book 'Be Cool' - but I'm seduced by the witty putdowns. For example:

'I can tell a rug. This one didn't fit him, it was too big. I don't know why but it reminded me of that story - I think it was Robert Mitchum, he sees this actor come on the set wearing a rug and he says to one of the grips, 'See the guy's toupee?' It looks just like Joan Crawford's bush.'
'Robert Mitchum, yeah, I can hear him,' Darryl said.

Or, the cool lack of respect for violent thugs in this sentence:

'He did mention some hip-hoppers with nasty manners and you read about them - you know, shooting each other.'

Why, though, does he have to call people 'Chili' and 'Tommy Athens'?

maryann, Thursday, 11 July 2002 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)

On the cover of 'Be Cool' it says that this is Elmore Leonard's masterpiece - and the title, 'Be Cool,' referring to the uh 'adoption of a mask,' as well as the 'self-referentiality' of the book sort of seem to make it a masterpiece of the genre in the sense of a meta- book.

maryann, Thursday, 11 July 2002 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)

That faux blank style has been emulated many times, but never quite to the dead pan effect Leonard's managed. Raymond Carver, on the other hand...

Matt, Thursday, 11 July 2002 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)

Does he write under any other pseudonyms?

maryann, Thursday, 11 July 2002 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)

Not as far as I'm aware, but given the ludicrously well-read level of this forum I'm sure someone'll contradict me shortly

Matt, Thursday, 11 July 2002 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)

Not sure that Leonard jumped any bestselling bandwagons - he started writing the crime stuff in the early seventies, and it was a long while before his bks got really popular. He does, however, owe a gigantic stylistic debt to George V. Higgins, esp. in the use of dialogue to tell the story/advance the narrative.

Andrew L, Friday, 12 July 2002 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)

Leonard wrote westerns under a pseudonymn but I know not what it is. I prefer Donald Westlake though (and his many psuedonymns).

Pete, Friday, 12 July 2002 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)

The only Leonard westerns I've seen (I have a couple) are published as 'Elmore Leonard', which is among the feebler disguises ever adopted.

I think he's a tremendous creator of characters and writer of dialogue. He's not as flawlessly naturalistic in his dialogue as Higgins (nor does he use it nearly as much as the main plot driver, though still more than almost anyone else), but I find his dialogue funnier and more energetic. His plotting is sometimes a bit lacking, but I really like him a lot - he is always at the very least enjoyable and never boring.

Martin Skidmore, Friday, 12 July 2002 00:00 (twenty-three years ago)

two years pass...
he has SO MANY books and they all seem to blend together in my head. but they are so enjoyable. he has a real way with pace and tempo i think.

i'm reading la brava now.

s/d?

s1ocki (slutsky), Monday, 8 November 2004 01:23 (twenty-one years ago)

Wow. I've a mind to say "search everything," 'cause I love the guy that much. Try "Out of Sight," "Rum Punch" (made into "Jackie Brown"), "Swag," "Freaky Deaky," "Glitz," "Gold Coast."

Rickey Wright (Rrrickey), Monday, 8 November 2004 08:58 (twenty-one years ago)

There's a shoutout to Creem in "Touch," I wanna say.

Rickey Wright (Rrrickey), Monday, 8 November 2004 09:00 (twenty-one years ago)

search: what rickey said, and 52 pickup.
destroy: get shorty, be cool.
has anyone read one of his westerns? im asking because i kinda liked joe kidd the movie.

:| (....), Monday, 8 November 2004 09:18 (twenty-one years ago)

I can vouch for Rum Punch and Out of Sight.
I also have one called Maximum Bob, which I haven't gotten to yet.
Anyone read it, worth a go?

From a Land of Grass Without Mirrors (AaronHz), Monday, 8 November 2004 09:21 (twenty-one years ago)

its ok. pretty absurd but leisurly paced. the title character is a total asshole and doesnt grow more likeable throuhgout the story.

:| (....), Monday, 8 November 2004 09:47 (twenty-one years ago)

"Maximum Bob" is really good. Very funny premise.

Rickey Wright (Rrrickey), Monday, 8 November 2004 10:32 (twenty-one years ago)

Hombre is a good western and a terrific action set-piece

jones (actual), Monday, 8 November 2004 16:37 (twenty-one years ago)

one of the few writers i see his new book in the library you know i'm going to borrow it.

bulbs (bulbs), Monday, 8 November 2004 21:29 (twenty-one years ago)

i heard one of his westerns on tape once in a car. it was very enjoyable.

s1ocki (slutsky), Monday, 8 November 2004 23:13 (twenty-one years ago)

two years pass...

I've never read his story, but the very fine original film version of 3:10 to Yuma (1957) is out on DVD today, just before the Crowe-Bale remake.

Dr Morbius, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 15:37 (eighteen years ago)

I really strongly dislike the poster for 3:10 to Yuma.

jessie monster, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 16:06 (eighteen years ago)

which? it's been changed.

Dr Morbius, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 16:19 (eighteen years ago)

the one with one of the leads shown from the back. his pants are too flared and I always think it's a woman when I first look at it.

jessie monster, Tuesday, 28 August 2007 16:23 (eighteen years ago)

five years pass...

just finished 'road dogs', which is really good and an unexpected sequel to three novels (feat. jack foley from 'out of sight', cundo rey from 'labrava', and dawn navarro from 'riding the rap.') dude is amazing imo.

christmas candy bar (al leong), Saturday, 3 August 2013 00:31 (twelve years ago)

http://www.vice.com/read/elmore-leonard-is-the-man-894-v16n6

also this interview is good and this bit is pretty funny:

then there’s the character of Danialle, when Jack and Dawn are supposed to be running this con on her. I expected that to be a long, suspenseful thread through the entire book but, bang, a few pages later you have her saying that she knew it was all a hoax and that she didn’t mind.

That character is named Danialle Karmanos because her husband paid $40,000 in an auction for me to use his wife’s name. I’ve been doing that for I don’t know how many books—fund-raising events where they’ll have an auction at different schools: “Do you want to be in my next book?”

Oh, so Danialle Karmanos is named after a real person? That’s funny.

Yeah! Karmanos is a cancer center, a big, big cancer-research and treatment center in Detroit. Her husband wanted to be in the book too, so he got into another auction and only had to pay $5,000 to win. But I gave him a lesser part.

Yeah, that character is a corpse!

He’s dead. [laughs]

Do you let them know what their role in the book is going to be, or do they just find out when it’s released?

I don’t tell anybody anything.

christmas candy bar (al leong), Saturday, 3 August 2013 00:34 (twelve years ago)

two weeks pass...

Suffered a stroke earlier this morning and word now going around he's passed on. Haven't seen anything formal yet.

Ned Raggett, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 13:32 (twelve years ago)

Earlier this MONTH I should say.

Ned Raggett, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 13:33 (twelve years ago)

Here it is

http://gaw.kr/MyKetu1

Ned Raggett, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 13:35 (twelve years ago)

in spite of decades of critical adulation and all the movie and TV projects, I think he was underrated ... he did his thing so well for so long it sort of came to seem routine, when it was anything but

Brad C., Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:09 (twelve years ago)

from rolling obit thread another obit

Elmore Leonard :(

http://www.detroitnews.com/article/20130820/ENT09/308200051/American-novelist-Elmore-Leonard-has-died?odyssey=mod|breaking|text|FRONTPAGE

― BIG HOOS aka the denigrated boogeyman (BIG HOOS aka the steendriver), Tuesday, August 20, 2013 1:51 PM (17 minutes ago) Bookmark Flag Post Permalink

curmudgeon, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:13 (twelve years ago)

Oh nooooooo

christmas candy bar (al leong), Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:16 (twelve years ago)

Fuuuuuck! That guy was such a gift. I remember reading an interview with I want to say Stephen King where he claimed that every time he finished a book he rewarded himself by reading an Elmore Leonard novel.

Josh in Chicago, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:18 (twelve years ago)

I mean, what an incredible, incredibly entertaining writer.

Josh in Chicago, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:19 (twelve years ago)

he was one of the absolute best

christmas candy bar (al leong), Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:19 (twelve years ago)

Wow, he was 87?! That was a sharp 87 year old.

Josh in Chicago, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:20 (twelve years ago)

Elmore Leonard's 10 Rules for Writing:

http://www.theguardian.com/books/2010/feb/20/ten-rules-for-writing-fiction-part-one

Josh in Chicago, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:21 (twelve years ago)

1 Never open a book with weather. If it's only to create atmosphere, and not a charac­ter's reaction to the weather, you don't want to go on too long. The reader is apt to leaf ahead look­ing for people. There are exceptions. If you happen to be Barry Lopez, who has more ways than an Eskimo to describe ice and snow in his book Arctic Dreams, you can do all the weather reporting you want.

2 Avoid prologues: they can be ­annoying, especially a prologue ­following an introduction that comes after a foreword. But these are ordinarily found in non-fiction. A prologue in a novel is backstory, and you can drop it in anywhere you want. There is a prologue in John Steinbeck's Sweet Thursday, but it's OK because a character in the book makes the point of what my rules are all about. He says: "I like a lot of talk in a book and I don't like to have nobody tell me what the guy that's talking looks like. I want to figure out what he looks like from the way he talks."

3 Never use a verb other than "said" to carry dialogue. The line of dialogue belongs to the character; the verb is the writer sticking his nose in. But "said" is far less intrusive than "grumbled", "gasped", "cautioned", "lied". I once noticed Mary McCarthy ending a line of dialogue with "she asseverated" and had to stop reading and go to the dictionary.

4 Never use an adverb to modify the verb "said" ... he admonished gravely. To use an adverb this way (or almost any way) is a mortal sin. The writer is now exposing himself in earnest, using a word that distracts and can interrupt the rhythm of the exchange. I have a character in one of my books tell how she used to write historical romances "full of rape and adverbs".

5 Keep your exclamation points ­under control. You are allowed no more than two or three per 100,000 words of prose. If you have the knack of playing with exclaimers the way Tom Wolfe does, you can throw them in by the handful.

6 Never use the words "suddenly" or "all hell broke loose". This rule doesn't require an explanation. I have noticed that writers who use "suddenly" tend to exercise less control in the application of exclamation points.

7 Use regional dialect, patois, sparingly. Once you start spelling words in dialogue phonetically and loading the page with apos­trophes, you won't be able to stop. Notice the way Annie Proulx captures the flavour of Wyoming voices in her book of short stories Close Range.

8 Avoid detailed descriptions of characters, which Steinbeck covered. In Ernest Hemingway's "Hills Like White Elephants", what do the "Ameri­can and the girl with him" look like? "She had taken off her hat and put it on the table." That's the only reference to a physical description in the story.

9 Don't go into great detail describing places and things, unless you're Margaret Atwood and can paint scenes with language. You don't want descriptions that bring the action, the flow of the story, to a standstill.

10 Try to leave out the part that readers tend to skip. Think of what you skip reading a novel: thick paragraphs of prose you can see have too many words in them.

My most important rule is one that sums up the 10: if it sounds like writing, I rewrite it.

Josh in Chicago, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:23 (twelve years ago)

NYT obit

http://www.nytimes.com/2013/08/21/books/elmore-leonard-master-of-crime-fiction-dies-at-87.html?src=twr&_r=0

Ned Raggett, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 14:41 (twelve years ago)

this thread title sucks! anyway, probably more memorable than 95% of living american "literary" novelists. but we live in a kinda lousy time for american literary novelists. they are superfluous in a way. you are better off reading elmore.

scott seward, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 15:55 (twelve years ago)

you are better off reading elmore.

Words to live by.

Josh in Chicago, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 16:21 (twelve years ago)

so bummed. but a long life with a lot of books.

and yes this thread title is awful

socki (s1ocki), Tuesday, 20 August 2013 16:22 (twelve years ago)

The man was a workhorse, in the best possible way. The fact that he was so ubiquitous in movies is a testament to the vividness of the characters he created and his writing in general, imo.

I am glad that a dude like Leonard stuck around for so long and gave us so much of his imagination to dig into.

set the controls for the heart of the sun (VegemiteGrrl), Tuesday, 20 August 2013 16:45 (twelve years ago)

RIP genius

the late great, Tuesday, 20 August 2013 16:49 (twelve years ago)

I'd forgotten that I'd read Touch, and that it was one of his. Very droll, as is Walken (acting!) in the movie.

Miss Arlington twirls for the Coal Heavers (Dr Morbius), Tuesday, 20 August 2013 19:33 (twelve years ago)

His later books fell away a bit, but still SO MANY GOOD ONES in his career

ornamental cabbage (James Morrison), Wednesday, 21 August 2013 00:27 (twelve years ago)

yesterday i went to the bookstore and had five of his books in hand, ready to buy, and put them back. woke up this morning to the news that he died and figured i should go back and get them (i did: riding the rap, bandits, freaky deaky, killshot, tishomingo blues)

christmas candy bar (al leong), Wednesday, 21 August 2013 00:42 (twelve years ago)

wait, i thought you were buying donald westlake books yesterday... changed your story huh

socki (s1ocki), Wednesday, 21 August 2013 00:44 (twelve years ago)

http://www.theonion.com/articles/elmore-leonard-modern-prose-master-noted-for-his-t,33559/

socki (s1ocki), Wednesday, 21 August 2013 00:45 (twelve years ago)

http://evangelchurch.cc/sites/default/files/images/sermons/LifeChangingStories.jpg

christmas candy bar (al leong), Wednesday, 21 August 2013 00:50 (twelve years ago)

ah that Onion piece is nice

set the controls for the heart of the sun (VegemiteGrrl), Wednesday, 21 August 2013 01:58 (twelve years ago)

to my eternal shame, I spent half of today confusing him with James Ellroy

Kiarostami bag (milo z), Wednesday, 21 August 2013 05:02 (twelve years ago)

>:(

set the controls for the heart of the sun (VegemiteGrrl), Wednesday, 21 August 2013 05:33 (twelve years ago)


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