Did anyone else actually get through The Corrections?

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Because I just did. I was listening to it on tape, which probably helped. My opinion of the book kept shifting while I was reading it (though the dysfunctional fucked-up-ness of the characters was pretty constant of course).

JuliaA (j_bdules), Friday, 23 January 2004 23:11 (twenty-two years ago)

Yeah, of course - i think its a really great book, beautifully written and incredible vivid characters. It has a slightly dissappointing ending.

jed_ (jed), Friday, 23 January 2004 23:50 (twenty-two years ago)

and its funny.

jed_ (jed), Friday, 23 January 2004 23:59 (twenty-two years ago)

I finished, it too - thought that the characters were wonderfully crafted and so human in how they were portrayed - it felt, to me, as though I knew each of them intimately. And they all reminded me of people (and some family members) in my life, which was a bit of a shock and made some of the events more dificult to read through. I felt that, overall, it was a sad book - not that that's a bad thing, just that it wasn't as much of an "upper" as I had hoped it would be. Of course, I kinda thought that it would be a comedy when I purchased it, so that was an interesting change of mindset for me. Anyway, I enjoyed his work.

Has anyone here read Frazen's The Twenty-Seventh City? I just finished it, in the past week or so, and can't figure-out just how I feel about the darn thing.

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Saturday, 24 January 2004 02:11 (twenty-two years ago)

Gary is an amazing character - the whole thing with the mixed grill dinner, hiding his vodka intake and trying to cut the hedge and slicing his hand is hilarious and touching.

jed_ (jed), Saturday, 24 January 2004 02:54 (twenty-two years ago)

Agreed, Jed. But I also found him to be an almost pathetic character - he had spent his life catering to his wife and doing things behind her back - it saddened me to think of someone having to live their life like that.

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Saturday, 24 January 2004 04:56 (twenty-two years ago)

I loved The Corrections. The academic satire with Chip; Gary's disfunctionality; Alfred and Edith on the boat (not sure about the talking shit though); the reconciliation between Alfred and Chip (Alfred's face "blazing with joy" as he opens the door made me stop and tear up a little, the poor bastard). What a good book.

Phil Christman, Saturday, 24 January 2004 05:34 (twenty-two years ago)

Gary didn't seem to get anywhere either--he just seemed stagnant in his pathetic existence. He could either alienate his family or bend to his wife's wishes, especially with her using the children against him.

With the talking shit I was totally thinking of South Park. And the doctor on the cruise ship who pushed the yellow pills was named Dr. Hibbard.

I read a lot of stuff that's very engaging and well-written but not too memorable, so it's refreshing to find a book that's both. The characters are going to linger in my mind for a long time.

At first the characters appear supremely fucked up that it just seemed beyond comprehension. Over time, there's more dimension: you can see the humanity and emotion behind some of the flawed decisions they make, and the characters became more relatable. It's disturbing but interesting to start to see facets of people you know in such dysfunctional characters. I had a very hard time with Enid. Her desperate optimism and denial of reality, her determination to have a harmonious family Christmas. I think it hit a little bit too close to home.

I was really glad I read this *after* the holidays with my family.

What were your impressions of that other Franzen book you just read, MsLaura? Would you recommend it?

JuliaA (j_bdules), Saturday, 24 January 2004 18:38 (twenty-two years ago)

I really liked the book, but I felt it needed some editing. It would have been more powerful if it had held together a little more tightly. (Which is why it surprises me Franzen is all about Paula Fox. She's so economical and surgical in her writing. Franzen is more bloated, covering all bases. He should take some tips from his favorite writer.)

I have Strong Motion, but haven't gotten around to reading it. Can anyone tell me how it compares to Corrections?

Jessa (Jessa), Saturday, 24 January 2004 18:49 (twenty-two years ago)

No, I didn't.

Chuck Tatum (Chuck Tatum), Saturday, 24 January 2004 20:53 (twenty-two years ago)

I mean, I got bored on the boat chapter and stopped. The first two sections were both wonderful, though. Should i CARRY ON?

Chuck Tatum (Chuck Tatum), Saturday, 24 January 2004 20:55 (twenty-two years ago)

ooops, excuse caps

Chuck Tatum (Chuck Tatum), Saturday, 24 January 2004 20:55 (twenty-two years ago)

*stares at dusty copy of Corrections complete with coffee cup rings*

Cupie (Cupie), Sunday, 25 January 2004 16:53 (twenty-two years ago)

Hmmmm - The Corrections as compared to The Twenty-Seventh City - well, I think that TC is far and above the stronger of the two books, in plot-line, themes, writing, and editing.

However, TTSC has a certain odd charm of its own - though I don't know that I'd characterize it as being particularly likable. Basically, it's set in St. Louis in 1984 - and shows how the town's civic and business leaders react to the arrival of a female Chief of Police, who is also from India. Rumors start to abound of corruption and conspiracies - it's somewhat of a political thriller, somewhat of an allegory of "anytown" USA toward the end of the Cold War, somewhat of an odd love story, somewhat a story of a man being manipulated by a crafty foe ... quite compelling ideas and an interesting exploration of themes, but I can't say that I loved the book. But I didn't hate it, either.

I hope that that helps a bit.

I too have Franzen's Strong Motion sitting on my shelf, but I've not cracked the spine of that novel - maybe sometime later this year?

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Monday, 26 January 2004 03:43 (twenty-two years ago)

I loved the description of Gary meeting his parents in the airport and how utterly confused and lost they looked. Not sure why that struck in my mind.

MikeyG (MikeyG), Monday, 26 January 2004 10:35 (twenty-two years ago)

I didn't even get through the title of the book when I realised who the dipshit author was.

writingstatic (writingstatic), Tuesday, 27 January 2004 22:09 (twenty-two years ago)

I loved the Corrections. It's so true that people are one way in their 'real' lives, and another when around their family.

maria d. (scott seward), Wednesday, 28 January 2004 01:43 (twenty-two years ago)

I didn't even get through the title of the book when I realised who the dipshit author was

Okay, I'll bite - just what makes Franzen a dipshit? (I'm so not aware of the current literary scene - this is an honest inquiry.)

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Wednesday, 28 January 2004 08:55 (twenty-two years ago)

Have you heard this character yammering on? I've been unfortunate enough to stumble across a few interviews with him here and there, and frankly he comes across as a big-headed, egotistical oaf, elitist in the extreme, with poor manners. This was after I flicked through that book of essays of his in the bookstore, and was left wholly underwhelmed by his sterile prose.

writingstatic (writingstatic), Wednesday, 28 January 2004 22:09 (twenty-two years ago)

Nope - I've managed to avoid hearing him speak/reading interviews with him. I see he's made an impressive impression on you though *grin*.

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Thursday, 29 January 2004 07:24 (twenty-two years ago)

He is a very, very cranky man, which is why I have a crush on him. I understand why people hate him, but in the literary world where everything is much too polite these days, someone out there saying all the wrong things makes my job a little bit more fun. (Plus, have you seen him lately? He's turned all Al Gore with the extra weight and the beard. I want to give him a hug.)

Jessa (Jessa), Thursday, 29 January 2004 14:50 (twenty-two years ago)

writingstatic seems to be always slagging off books he hasn't read it seems.

jed_ (jed), Thursday, 29 January 2004 16:33 (twenty-two years ago)

and ill say "seems" one more time just for good measure.

jed_ (jed), Thursday, 29 January 2004 17:18 (twenty-two years ago)

I agree with all of the people who have suggested that The Corrections was in need of some ruthless editing. Some parts of the book just made me want to gag. The daughter having an affair with husband AND wife! Give me a break. Franzen should have kept his little lesbian fantasies to himself. And don't get me started on the talking shit and the miracle pills.

That said, I saw him talk (not a reading, more of a "here is my experience of 'the writing life'" thing) shortly after he won the NBA and found I didn't despise him in person as much as I expected to.

quincie, Thursday, 29 January 2004 17:56 (twenty-two years ago)

Talking shits: CLASSIC
Franzen telling Oprah to shove her book club: CLASSIC

Donna Brown (Donna Brown), Thursday, 29 January 2004 18:31 (twenty-two years ago)

I'm Passing: Impression is true. Maybe I could give him another shot just because I despise him so much ;)

Jed: You're right, because when I hate a book enough, I don't finish reading it.

writingstatic (writingstatic), Thursday, 29 January 2004 22:30 (twenty-two years ago)

How about Lemony Snicket? Now he's cranky. What do you think of him, particularly the singing and the jovial-thirteen-year-old-boffin look.

R the bunged up with jollop of V (Jake Proudlock), Friday, 30 January 2004 00:18 (twenty-two years ago)

writingstatic - Well, at least you can remember his name and know what he's written. He's done well in getting that across *grin*.

And about Lemony Snicket - woo-hoo, I also know nothing about him (er, the real author behind Snicket, that is - I do know something about Snicket based on those delightful blubs at the end of his books, and the Unauthorized Autobiography too). Wait, that isn't true - I remember reading somewhere that he was attracted to his girlfriend/wife because she reminded him of the daughter in either The Munsters or The Addams Family (sorry, I've never seen either show or the movie).

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Friday, 30 January 2004 05:19 (twenty-two years ago)

This thread is funny bcz writingstatic totally reminds me of Franzen.

Julio Desouza (jdesouza), Friday, 30 January 2004 09:22 (twenty-two years ago)

Julio: I hate you.

writingstatic (writingstatic), Monday, 2 February 2004 06:20 (twenty-two years ago)

I love Lemony Snicket. The greatest compliment ever paid to me was that I looked like a character from one of his books.

Jessa (Jessa), Monday, 2 February 2004 14:02 (twenty-two years ago)

Ah, but were you compared to a specific character, Jessa?

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Monday, 2 February 2004 21:33 (twenty-two years ago)

The talking turd was the weakest thing in The Corrections, I thought... I didn't really think the Edith and Alfred cruise section hung together very well, it kind of ruined the flow of the book for me a bit.

Someone said on an old Franzen ILE thread that he appears to have a total lack of sympathy for all his characters, but I thought Chip and Denise in particular came across pretty well, considering. This may be because I found myself identifying with Chip to a frankly depressing degree.

Matt DC (Matt DC), Tuesday, 3 February 2004 14:13 (twenty-two years ago)

i indentified with gary to a simliar degree - it was similary depressing.

jed_ (jed), Tuesday, 3 February 2004 19:40 (twenty-two years ago)

I felt reassured that someone else's poo talked too!

queen G (nee Onassis), Saturday, 7 February 2004 09:40 (twenty-two years ago)

Ms. Laura: No. Just something out of one of the books. This is the picture that made him say it.

Jessa (Jessa), Saturday, 7 February 2004 16:35 (twenty-two years ago)

That is a most awesome photograph.

I'm Passing Open Windows (Ms Laura), Saturday, 7 February 2004 19:49 (twenty-two years ago)

It took me two tries to get through it, but it was worth it the 2nd time. And Matt DC, i agree with you, I liked how the story became more sympathetic towards the characters by the end of the book (with the exception of Gary), even as it still somewhat coldly displayed everyone's flaws, psychoses, etc. Plus, it was one of the first books in a long time that evoked a character (Chip, in particular) so well that I actually got pissed off at how he acted.

tl (tom), Saturday, 7 February 2004 20:33 (twenty-two years ago)

i have to say i dont think i have laughed so hard at at a book as when chip wraps his christmas gifts in tinfoil and sticks them closed with pro-choice stickers.

jed_ (jed), Saturday, 7 February 2004 23:39 (twenty-two years ago)

I really dug the book, but I agree that some liberal editing would have been nice. The Chip-in-Europe stuff was waaaay too farfetched for me, and some of the Denise lesbian plot was a little voyeuristic for my liking. But the Gary stuff was brilliant. The mixed grill and his alliance with Jonah were really moving, and well-managed, and felt to me like the next avatar of the Updike style. Also, I thought that the talking shit business was weirdly evocative of the sewer journey Tyrone Slothrup takes early in Gravity's Rainbow. And I can't help but think that Franzen must definately have read that text and been influenced by it.

Jeremy Coombs (Atila the Honeybun), Tuesday, 17 February 2004 21:56 (twenty-two years ago)

I too have a copy of Strong Motion which I bought only because I went to a reading/signing he gave and needed something for him to write on. Given my experience as detailed in the Tales of Horror thread, I intended to remain mostly mute at the actual face-to-face moment. When I handed it to him and he asked "Have you read this one?" all I could mumble, at a subaudible level was "Um. No." I don't know if he was just trying to make me less uncomfortable, but he added something like "I'm really fond of that book. I feel really attached to that book".

On a related note, based on his performance and the odd interview I've read of him, I can't understand how people (writingstatic) can take such an objection to him. I thought his manners were impeccable. And don't get me wrong: I usually find it very easy to dislike people.

David Joyner (David Joyner), Friday, 20 February 2004 01:31 (twenty-two years ago)

i agree - i saw him at a bizarre reading in edinburgh which was hijacked by a mad old lithuanian man - he was extremely nice and came over to shake my hand when i mentioned that i though Gary was the core of the book. i thought he was charming.

jed_ (jed), Friday, 20 February 2004 02:12 (twenty-two years ago)

No. I become so completely bored and fed up with the whole thing only 20 pages to the end. I often look at it on my bookshelf and think "I really ought to finish that..." But I never do. I simply don't care how it ends.

Kathleen, Sunday, 22 February 2004 04:25 (twenty-two years ago)

ten months pass...
Ooh!

the bellefox, Monday, 27 December 2004 22:57 (twenty-one years ago)

I stole this book.

cºzen (Cozen), Tuesday, 28 December 2004 01:17 (twenty-one years ago)

Franzen is all about Paula Fox

what does this mean?

the bellefox, Tuesday, 28 December 2004 10:15 (twenty-one years ago)

It seems bizarre to stop reading a long book 20pp from the end.

Yet, The Corrections ends quite poorly, I think, so maybe that was an oddly good odd decision?

TS: 'little lesbian fantasies' vs writing a big novel with lesbians in it.

TS: writing a novel with lesbians in it vs avoiding writing a novel with lesbians in it.

Matt DC says that he strongly identifies with Chip. I wonder what it is that most prompts his feeling: the promiscuity; the drug addiction; the teaching skills; the dismissal for sexual misconduct; the crazy interlude in Eastern Europe, ending with being held up by police in ski masks; or just the knowledge of Marcuse and Foucault?

the pinefox, Tuesday, 28 December 2004 10:23 (twenty-one years ago)

I did read the book in the middle of a family xmas, and I am glad: I suppose there is no better time.

I had thought that this thread was full of attacks on the book, which put me off it as I finished it last night. But I was wrong - the thread is more full of apt praise.

Could the book's (perhaps; arguably) poor ending harm its impression on some readers? A bad time to be bad, the end. (Brick Lane ends appallingly after being merely mediocre throughout.) Yet the bulk of it is so fine: so detailed and nuanced; so felt and thought-provoking. I strongly agree with the posters above who found Gary's domestic travails hilarious: repeatedly they made me laugh.

the bellefox, Tuesday, 28 December 2004 10:27 (twenty-one years ago)

I identified with Chip as a snotty asshole who runs to New York, away from family. He and Enid made the book for me. I don't remember or care to remember much about Gary or Denise or the dad. And before scanning this thread just now, I had forgotten about the talking poo. Hopefully I will forget about it again.

Franzen's at his weakest when he gets kinda hyperrealist (so-called) -- when he sounds like DFW, talking pharmaceuticals and "factors", for instance.

W i l l (common_person), Tuesday, 28 December 2004 15:53 (twenty-one years ago)

I've almost given up expecting good endings in modern novels - so few of them have them. This is worth a thread in itself, perhaps. I've written a little about it on Freaky Trigger, and talked about it a fair bit with Sinkah - it's particularly a problem in PoMo novels.

Martin Skidmore (Martin Skidmore), Tuesday, 28 December 2004 18:32 (twenty-one years ago)

I quite agree about Frantzen going on too much about Factors, drugs etc. Those things are not my language.

(PS / The book reminded me yesterday of Mark S himself, and I wonder whether he has read it [probably he has]: for it seems to have a couple of oddly large crossovers with his own life and preoccupations. [On reflection, I imagine he does not greatly rate it; but I am fantasizing now.])

the bellefox, Tuesday, 28 December 2004 18:44 (twenty-one years ago)

I thought that stuff was the most successful satire in the book, commenting on how much these ideas about depression have taken root, especially in the US of course.

Martin Skidmore (Martin Skidmore), Tuesday, 28 December 2004 22:01 (twenty-one years ago)

five months pass...
I didn't mind Alfred's hallucinations. His face-forward slide into dementia was one of the things in this book that rang true for me. I've been around older people slipping away like this, wondering what they think is actually happening around them, and Alfred came pretty close to describing this.

The talking poo maybe seemed outlandish, but who knows what disgusting, silly things happen behind people's heads? My a/c went out a few years ago on the hottest night of the year, and I spend the night thinking that a band had come to stay in my house, and that they were shooting ping-pong balls over my head at the wall.

It was scary to see Gary beginning to exhibit the same characteristics (i.e. urinating into the beer stein.) The characters were real enough for me to wonder how Caroline would handle her husband in thirty years.

Judging from the photo on the inner sleeve, Franzen does look like an insufferable prick, but hey.

Pleasant Plains /// (Pleasant Plains ///), Monday, 20 June 2005 18:23 (twenty-one years ago)

great novel! very funny, and touching. the end was very sad.

j fail (cenotaph), Monday, 20 June 2005 18:40 (twenty-one years ago)


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